This is the Track Where I Rant About the Shit of the World

This is the Track Where I Rant About the Shit of the World

All the joys of the world
Wrapped up in a little place
In the back of your mind
It’s very own empty space

We walk the streets
Hand-in-hand
Spreading our blasphemy
Corrupting this land

Taking from the poor
Giving to the rich
Always looking for a quick cure
But guess what – life’s a bitch

*(Chorus)*
Drugs, alcohol, sex, bombs, war, guns
Corrupted politicians, fucked up government, police
Teenage angst, hate, riots, dying sons
No matter how much we try, we’ll never have peace

If we gave you the chance
Would you care about them
Let’s finish our deadly dance
Before we start to condemn
*(End Chorus)*

Forsaking the children
Laughing at the old
Nothing to live for then
Suicidal gold

In through the window
Out through the bullet
Hell, we’re giving you a vow
We’re all going to go through shit

*(Chorus)*

Grow your wings from here on out
Best learn your place quickly
Are you a leader or follower
Don’t take it so thickly

Let’s get this over with
With our fists raised high
Let’s conquer this together
We’ll be entering from the sky!

*Chorus 2x*

If we had the chance to tell you
Would you believe it true
The painting in blood, a hue
Would it be hard to chew
If you really knew
The pain we all go through
You couldn’t care less too
Because you’re ass’s glued
To the rhythm we just drew

So let us condemn the old
Condemn the youth
We’re all growing cold
We’ll never know the truth

*(Chorus)*

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This was actually osmehting to read. However, you know body that songs like this are overdone. I've seen so many. This one is kinda different in the sence you splashed it up with goth verses and painted some imagery. Not your best, but still good.

Nota bad,

B|F

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Thank ya for the honesty I appreciate it

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I do my best....XD

Honesty is forever.

B|F

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YAY! That's what I like to hear

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This was pretty awesome. Something faster in my mind

It would be a faster one. Maybe something like Deer Dance by System of a Down

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i love how this is so awesome

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really cool, I like it

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Thank you very much

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Nice and powerful... Know I looked at this before, just didn't have the time to say anything. lol.

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More than one,
less than none,
Worthless?

Gain some time,
but lose the rhyme,
Useless?

Thank ya very much

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