I read the poem twice to understand it better. Thus was I taught in my Rock Poetry class in high school. I liked the poem, understood it, wish I knew some good feedback to write to you. I agree that the end is a little too short or something -- maybe a stanza that repeats the me phrase twice? Also the rhyme of TV was clever, but brought me up short, like I noticed it too much after all the other examples. Just a note.
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