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08-14-2006, 08:20 PM
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Angels Feel Happy Too
Angels Feel Happy To I know I look like I need a little more But really I just need some more floor So that I can move on once more Before I once again can explore I will always feel lost but not today I must move away So I better not delay Or my life might spin back into disarray (Chorus) If angels can feel happy Every once and a while Then I can try and change my style And walk that extra mile And even make that smile (End Chorus) I know I look like I need a little more But really I just need some more floor Because I have been trapped behind this door And once more I can not ignore This war This war with my emotions That has spread across the oceans And made it so I have no motions So once again (Chorus) I just wanted to let you know I can make it And that I can now take it And that I have nothing left to admit Except (Chorus) 
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08-14-2006, 08:30 PM
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Wasn't a bad read at all. Something I'll need to hear first for it to really catch my mind. The rhymes felt a little forced, but again, something I'll need to hear to judge. Nice
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08-14-2006, 09:10 PM
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Spelling error in title: should be -
Angels Feel Happy Too
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08-14-2006, 10:04 PM
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Everything but the rhymes and the forced words made this piece worthwhile...
Nice on M.M B|F
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08-15-2006, 10:28 AM
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yea, i wasnt trying very hard with this song so everthing didnt work very good.
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10-20-2006, 10:23 AM
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But there is great potential hanging here...the rhymes aren't so bad, and they get the idea across quite well.
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03-17-2008, 01:29 PM
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thanx cold
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