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Tell Me The Tale
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08-06-2006, 02:46 PM
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Tell Me The Tale
Tell the tale
Like all the children heard Tell the tale Floating upon the bird Tell me the tale Of the man that died Tell me the tale Of the little girl that lied Tell me that tale Where the teenager lived Tell me that tale Where the teenager thrived Tell the tale Of the little boy’s first homerun Tell the tale Of that same little boy’s accident with a gun Tell me the tale When the good guy comes first Tell me the tale When evil’s clinched its thirst Tell me that tale When someone actually cared Tell me that tale When that little girl ceased to be scared Tell the tale Of all the little crying girls Tell the tale Of all their tears of blood streaming down their curls Tell me the tale Of the suicidal kids that don’t know Tell me the tale Of all the people that just let them go Tell me those tales How many tales can you tell? Tell me those tales Before all those kids go to hell Tell me every tale About the time you cared Tell me every tale So you won’t be scared Tell me all those tales So you won’t be scared
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08-06-2006, 02:58 PM
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Quite fascinating, but why do you care if I told you all these tales? If you already know them. It's a nice poem.
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08-06-2006, 03:00 PM
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lol - Thank you for reading
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08-06-2006, 03:29 PM
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Lose the reptition and you'll have something much stronger.
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08-06-2006, 04:32 PM
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Hey do you want to know a tale?
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08-06-2006, 06:43 PM
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Always
I love listening (hints why I wrote this.) Anyone that wants to vent, or tell me something just to have someone listen, feel free to tell it in any of my threads, or Pager/PM/Email me a link to your own thread of it, or PM me directly
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08-08-2006, 04:03 AM
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I really don't know about this stuff, I've read alot of your other stuff and it's good. this one just seems like it's... we'll Idk. like it goes no where. but that's just my take on it.
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08-08-2006, 07:09 AM
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Totally understandable
Thank you for your thoughts
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08-08-2006, 07:19 AM
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over all, I liked it.
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08-08-2006, 07:21 AM
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Very....interesting...hehe
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08-08-2006, 07:31 AM
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Thank ya both
I appreciate it
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#12
08-08-2006, 07:38 AM
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cool
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08-08-2006, 07:39 AM
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Thanks
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