WritersBeat.com
 

Go Back   WritersBeat.com > Write Here > Poetry

Poetry Sit down or take a stand in this poetry section.


a life recital

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 05-17-2013, 10:11 AM
Nacia's Avatar
Nacia (Offline)
Legend
Official Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: London, England.
Posts: 9,636
Thanks: 2,233
Thanks 883
Default a life recital


in hope nourishes
the soul
in warmth polishes
the fall
in laughter races
the thought
in awe embellishes
the love
and
in life nothing ceases
nor stalls

__________________
the world is a school
so big you could fool a ruler for a cooler
and each city is a classroom
you could be in an air loom to last you to the moon

Last edited by Nacia; 05-17-2013 at 10:19 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 05-18-2013, 09:17 PM
maidahl
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Default

THIS IS SO GOOD>

Nor stalls.

You are so epic. You're like writing for every genre, in a really rad kinda way. You're like my rockstar.
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to For This Useful Post:
Nacia (05-20-2013)
  #3  
Old 05-20-2013, 12:45 AM
Nacia's Avatar
Nacia (Offline)
Legend
Official Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: London, England.
Posts: 9,636
Thanks: 2,233
Thanks 883
Default

hehe maidhal sooooo glad you liked this one.
also nice to see you back hope you are okay
__________________
the world is a school
so big you could fool a ruler for a cooler
and each city is a classroom
you could be in an air loom to last you to the moon
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 05-21-2013, 06:05 AM
Hidrolic (Offline)
Word Wizard
Official Member
 
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 529
Thanks: 36
Thanks 74
Default

Not bad Nacia, I like this one.
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 05-21-2013, 10:45 PM
Nacia's Avatar
Nacia (Offline)
Legend
Official Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: London, England.
Posts: 9,636
Thanks: 2,233
Thanks 883
Default

Originally Posted by Hidrolic View Post
Not bad Nacia, I like this one.
Hidrolic glad you liked this one and nice to see you back
__________________
the world is a school
so big you could fool a ruler for a cooler
and each city is a classroom
you could be in an air loom to last you to the moon
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 05-22-2013, 12:42 AM
Pat75 (Offline)
Abnormally Articulate
Official Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 144
Thanks: 67
Thanks 39
Default

This is so beautiful, thanks. I have nominated it for Members Choice I thought it was that good.
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 05-22-2013, 12:50 AM
Nacia's Avatar
Nacia (Offline)
Legend
Official Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: London, England.
Posts: 9,636
Thanks: 2,233
Thanks 883
Default

Originally Posted by Pat75 View Post
This is so beautiful, thanks. I have nominated it for Members Choice I thought it was that good.
Pat75 thank you very much it is very kind
__________________
the world is a school
so big you could fool a ruler for a cooler
and each city is a classroom
you could be in an air loom to last you to the moon
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 05-22-2013, 04:44 AM
KBR (Offline)
Heartbreaking Writer of Staggering Genius
 
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Monterey CA
Posts: 1,917
Thanks: 1,063
Thanks 655
Default

Agree with all above Nacia! Great job! Kirk
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to KBR For This Useful Post:
Nacia (05-22-2013)
Reply

  WritersBeat.com > Write Here > Poetry


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Creep World (WIP) MalReynolds Fiction 21 09-07-2017 06:06 AM
The Sands of Time two lls Fiction 0 02-10-2010 03:59 PM
Love after Life lifeislove Non-Fiction 21 05-17-2009 03:41 AM
The Eight Wisdoms of life Mastery tallisen Fiction 5 03-17-2009 03:34 AM


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 01:23 AM.

vBulletin, Copyright © 2000-2006, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.