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Old 11-12-2011, 12:09 PM
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So I looked at the free writing and saw the one liners are not permitted. I am trying to improve my writing by reading a book in the genre I am interested in writing in, taking paragraphs and their formats, and turning them into my own topics with my own sentences. I have several of them, including one liners. Can I use all of them as one or should I just one paragraph and exclude the one liners?

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Old 11-12-2011, 12:17 PM
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Huh? I'm not sure what you're asking? You are rewriting paragraphs from books in the genre you like, and you want to write them in one-liners? Or in paragraphs?
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Old 11-12-2011, 12:32 PM
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Most of them are in paragraphs. They are only similar in format. The topics are completely original. I could just include the paragraphs and leave out the one-liners.
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I guess Free Writing would be the place, but I'm still not quite sure what you're asking . . . but if you want critique on something that's not a story or excerpt, go ahead and put it up in Free Writing.
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