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Neurotic Nightmares

05-03-2006, 08:21 AM
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Neurotic Nightmares

Nightmares
So vice
Cheshire Cat's grin
Demented as Grim
A Mad Tea-Party
With a distorted pair
Off with her head
Let her die in bed
Blood-strained and blood red
Little Alice, little Alice
Sleeping as you may
Little Alice, little Alice,
Want to come to play?
Little Alice, little Alice
Big bright blue eyes
Little Alice, little Alice
Following the cries
Little Alice, little Alice
You are going to pay
FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
PURGATORY
Little Alice, little Alice
Listen to the sounds
Little Alice, little Alice
Death defying frowns
Little Alice, little Alice
Please try to wake up
Little Alice, little Alice
Floating in Death’s cup
Little Alice, little Alice
You are going to pay
FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
PURGATORY
Little Alice, little Alice
Cries a sea of tears
Little Alice, little Alice
Seeing all her fears
Little Alice, Little Alice
Why have you cried?
Little Alice, Little Alice
Why have you died?
FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
PURGATORY
Nightmares
Of a child
Cheshire Cat's grin
Wild
A Mad Tea-Party
With a distorted pair
Off with her head
Let her die in bed
Blood-strained
Blood red
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08-01-2006, 11:20 AM
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im surprised this got overlooked. this so daamn awesome
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08-01-2006, 11:34 AM
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Thank you  I'm glad you liked it.
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08-01-2006, 01:26 PM
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This is one of my favorites from you
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08-01-2006, 01:29 PM
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Thank you so much 
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08-01-2006, 01:43 PM
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dude, this song makes me wanna go take a poop. just kidding, very awesome
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08-01-2006, 02:04 PM
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08-01-2006, 04:48 PM
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lol. Only one thing that was jarring... Great song! Slightly disturbing, but great!
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08-01-2006, 07:49 PM
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Oopsie-daisy. Thank you CT - Means a lot.
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08-02-2006, 06:12 AM
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awsome dude thats great betterer then any song i could write
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08-02-2006, 10:17 AM
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 I appreciate the thoughts 
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09-29-2006, 11:20 AM
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A lot of changes and fixes, but I held true to the main story of my song  Hope you guys like it
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09-29-2006, 11:48 AM
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Originally Posted by Oasis Writer
Little Alice, little Alice
Sleeping as you may
Little Alice, little Alice,
Want to come to play[?]
FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
[Why Dante? If keeping this, perhaps make it plural...]
PURGATORY
FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENRED
{Typo, yeah, but Demon Red is interesting too. }
DANTE
PURGATORY
FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENRED
DANTE
PURGATORY
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Whee! FUN song!
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09-29-2006, 11:54 AM
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Thanks a lot  I appreciate it a ton
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09-30-2006, 11:44 PM
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The funnest song I've ever screamed...
Jolly good, Devon
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10-01-2006, 08:49 AM
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Thank you buddy 
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