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Old 03-07-2011, 04:17 PM
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How to move on

Continuing to be desire made flesh
and
knowing common humanness

How to evolve
To change from ageing to ageless

To see and know with
the eyes and mind of God

How to go on animating this birthday suit
and knowing each sack filling breath to be
not so much an automatic defense against demise
but more a conscious expression of faith

Faith in Life and living it as it occurs
Living it as best one can at each pulsing moment

Playing out the string obvious while following it
into the place that is not

Here comes the Sun
Hello, Sunday


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Old 03-08-2011, 01:31 AM
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'Humaness' is a great word. Should be used more often. Do you think it might look better with an extra 'n'?
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'Humaness' is a great word. Should be used more often. Do you think it might look better with an extra 'n'?
I dunno. Let's give it a try. Alteration added.
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Now I went and checked the online dictionary. It does have two 'n's.
I didn't even know it was a word.
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Old 03-08-2011, 02:24 AM
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Neither did I!

It certainly looks more accomplished with two 'n's.
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common, two 'm's, one 'n'
humanness, one 'm', two 'n's

A subtle balance of diverting consants brought to y'all by Nadja & Nick.
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