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Old 04-05-2010, 02:16 PM
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Are there drag princesses?
I used to think so. Imagine my embarrassment the day I showed up at a drag race in a ball gown and running shoes.
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I can imagine that. Which troubles me.
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Old 04-06-2010, 10:24 AM
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It troubles me more that you think of me in that way.
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Old 04-06-2010, 12:59 PM
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Have I got a GREAT idea for a screenplay!
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Do I get to be the good-looking guy?
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Old 04-06-2010, 01:24 PM
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Let me put it this way, are your running shoes dainty?
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Old 04-06-2010, 01:25 PM
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I have good shoes you can borrow...
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As dainty as my lace underwear...
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What colour? They're black and shiny and several inches high!
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Hmmm... maybe latex would be more appropriate then.
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You'll need some talc to guard against chafing...
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Poor girl thinks I'm kidding...
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You hope I think your kidding
...I warn you I'm repressed...now let's play
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And snub Lin? I'd lose my part in the movie.
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The producers were hoping for glass slippers, but really sheer undies might do.
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Time i got myself waxed, then.
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Originally Posted by Redlorry View Post
...I warn you I'm repressed...
Heh. More repressed than you thought, huh?
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Old 04-07-2010, 12:23 AM
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I'm reserving judgement.

But you can borrow my body lotion, you'll need it after you get waxed.
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Old 04-09-2010, 03:53 PM
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Originally Posted by Lin View Post
The producers were hoping for glass slippers, but really sheer undies might do.
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Time i got myself waxed, then.
Come on gents - what happens next, this was my favorite show on here!
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...take my word for it- ditch the talcum powder and use coconut oil instead...
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Old 04-10-2010, 03:25 PM
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What he said
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Old 04-10-2010, 03:28 PM
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Coconut oil?
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