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Old 03-15-2010, 12:24 PM
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I agree with Night Wanderer, yet I feel that they should also be listed in alphabetical order once, and another time in chronological order, according to age. Oldest to youngest preferably.


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Old 03-15-2010, 12:33 PM
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Exactly. Number 1 should be 1 year old, Number 16 should be 16 years old, etc. If you have a 190 year old character, you need 189 other characters to support him. Or, of course, her.
No two characters should be the same age because people will get confused. And, naturally, this list should also be in order of ascending height, from shortest to fattest.
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Old 03-15-2010, 01:09 PM
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It can get complicated writing for more than 150 characters in one story, so the way you deal with that is, after you make the lists, you say, "39 mer-elves were bitten by sharks and died." Then you list the names of the ones who died, also chronologically, so that people know which ones won't be appearing in the story.
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Old 03-15-2010, 01:13 PM
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And don't forget the names, ages, and addresses of the sharks.
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Old 03-15-2010, 01:28 PM
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Old 03-15-2010, 01:32 PM
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Also, Lin is completely right about the characters-never-the-same-age rule, but he forgot to mention the exception: twins. They're allowed, but only if they have the same name, so people won't get confused that two differently-named characters were born in the same year. They have to be identical twins, too, because if you describe each of them differently, people will always get them mixed up!
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Thanks again. If there is also a sorceress/spy that became good then do I need to say that it happened. Vena is the sorceress/spy for Tai but then decided not to be Tai's spy anymore and loses her powers as sorceress and then becomes the advisor of the aguain clan.
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Old 03-15-2010, 02:01 PM
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I certainly hope she can fly because you get a lot readers in when you have flying sorcerer plots.
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Old 03-15-2010, 02:03 PM
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Vena can fly like a bird.
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Old 03-15-2010, 02:36 PM
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That's no good. She should fly like a banana.
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Old 03-15-2010, 02:42 PM
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Or like Steve Miller
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Old 03-15-2010, 02:53 PM
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That would be cool.
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Old 03-15-2010, 02:57 PM
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It sure as hell would, you know. He's the gangster of love.
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Old 03-15-2010, 02:59 PM
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Eh, only some people call him that.

(I prefer to call him Maurice. :P)
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Old 03-15-2010, 03:20 PM
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I'm sure we can agree he can fly in space like a cowboy.
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Old 03-15-2010, 03:32 PM
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Indubitably.
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Old 03-18-2010, 08:31 AM
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Is it okay what to write that Leilani was a dark-haired beauty and Arianna was a light-haired beauty?
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Old 03-18-2010, 09:13 AM
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Not if it's the other way around. Or if they are skanks in real life.
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Old 03-18-2010, 09:34 AM
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Thanks.
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Old 03-18-2010, 09:51 AM
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Oh, no charge
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:12 PM
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Mermaid elf children-Is it better to the mermaid elves to have 3 or 4 kids?
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:21 PM
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Depends on whether or not they eat their young.
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:22 PM
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They don't eat their young.
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They should.
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:27 PM
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They should what?
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:28 PM
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Well, actually, if they could they would.
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:32 PM
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I'll have them not eat their young.
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:33 PM
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Party pooper
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Old 03-18-2010, 04:48 PM
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Okay. I'll say the some of the mermaid elves lay eggs.
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Old 03-18-2010, 05:00 PM
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And then they eat them?
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