Okay, Shay... You give a lil', and I give back.
So this sound a little like free flow poetry in prose. I'm not sure what you're getting at here, lass. It's interesting. I take it that The Joker is a metaphor for Fate or something, or or is it allegorical of life as a game of chance, and the jester is always wild?
Bitter much? Or do you like the masochism? I think you do, you reveling wallower in nihilism...
I'm not going to worry about SPaG. I'll let somebody else tackle that.
You write very nicely. Your voice is very clear. What you are saying isn't, but it has style. There are a couple of redundant spots, but maybe that was intended. This could have been posted in the poetry section.
Break it up a bit and... Well, do what you want. love. You're sexy whatever you do.
Stay Cool, Roll Solid, And Write Hard!!!
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