Go Back   WritersBeat.com > Write Here > Poetry

Poetry Sit down or take a stand in this poetry section.

Euphoria Unica CHAPTER: Distal, small extract

Thread Tools
Old 05-09-2013, 09:13 AM
Juilingstar177 (Offline)
Word Wizard
Official Member
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: In my own world
Posts: 675
Thanks: 38
Thanks 94
Default Euphoria Unica CHAPTER: Distal, small extract

distal part of me,
scratched underneath.
me under a ocean
no thought is yours, never be.

my colors are mine,
your eye can never see,
what I see never can said,
in word's symphony.

my pinnacle of miracle,
my world is shore.
my mind is sand,
an bridge is laid.


(To protect my poems from plagiarism, I have stopped posting last two or three verse of the poem. I just went to know whether my poem is good or bad. Sorry for inconvenience hence . Generally cutoff verses are conclusion of the poem as whole. This particular piece is a part of my long poem(Euphoria Unica, chapter 1.a, with one verse cut off from the subpoem.)

I am also interested in any "interested" readers.

Reply With Quote
Old 05-12-2013, 05:32 AM
iDrew's Avatar
iDrew (Offline)
Heartbreaking Writer of Staggering Genius
Official Member
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Throwing wishes off the end of world's longest pier
Posts: 1,272
Thanks: 0
Thanks 443

I would spend less time concerning yourself with plagiarists and put your time and energy into your use of grammar.


To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
(min. system requirement: 1 working brain cell)
Reply With Quote

  WritersBeat.com > Write Here > Poetry

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Creep World (WIP) MalReynolds Fiction 21 09-07-2017 06:06 AM
Juno komodo117 Free Writing 1 01-30-2007 04:44 PM
[Fantasy]The Dark Forest Novel [WIP] Desmond Tiny Fiction 1 12-02-2006 09:15 AM
Death Weaver : Chapter II & III Testament Fiction 4 11-09-2006 09:21 AM

All times are GMT -8. The time now is 02:48 AM.

vBulletin, Copyright © 2000-2006, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.