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Old 12-17-2005, 02:24 AM
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here are what my one of the stories are about.

unknown talents is about a girl who finds out that she is a witch. Everything blows up in her face. first her boyfriends dies while he is on vacation, then her best friend is in a car accident. She has dreams about her families past and sees her great great cousin get burned at the stake. There are times in the story where she is thinking that she is going crazy. Her boyfriend is not really dead, he turns out to be a warlock, and his family has cursed her family 200 years ago. He is threatened by her because only she can destroy him, that is why he is trying to make her go crazy and kill herself. She also had a twin sister that she thought died at birth, but the her father gave her up for adoption on the black market to try and kill the curse.

Her boyfriend Johnny is controlling her twin to make her do the terrible things that Samantha thinks she is doing.

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Old 12-18-2005, 04:24 AM
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I do like the sound of that. Make sure you keep as far away from HP as you can. Do you want this to be an adult read? I'd love to see some adult witch and warlock tale. Good luck, I can't wait to read it.
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thank you. It is not going to be anywhere near the hp books. the only thing that I have problem with is adding deatails. I am getting better with it, but it is not where i would like it.
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maybe you should pick up some current witches and warlock books to kind of "bone up" on the subject matter and see what some published writers are doing. Could be very helpful.
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