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Old 07-27-2016, 02:25 PM
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Default Chapter 1 (PG-13) word count: I'm not counting...


I'm just bored. Slinging the first thought that comes to mind, which is often poor advise.

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Old 07-28-2016, 06:07 AM
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This guy got some serious swag.
I think you misrepresented this by saying PG-13. Mods might make you move it. Little Johnny who only just grew his first pube might read this and have wet dreams for the next month.
On a serious note, I like the story and the character's great because I can empathise with him. I want to see him get taken down a notch by something though cos he seems a little angry.
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