I write poetry to work through my feelings too, and it seems like folks are responding to the feeling of the piece. So let me congratulate you for writing a piece that's emotionally evocative! I was immediately drawn towards the experience the narrator is having, and empathetically related. I was a little taken by the phrasing, but at this point I can't really see the poem's structure.
I will say this: The title of the poem is a little... snide. It doesn't serve the earnestness of what you've written here.
Some of my poetry and short stories are online at
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