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08-07-2012, 12:41 PM
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Skinnydipping
The plum fingers of a lilac night
Bruise the fringes of a waning sunset. Soundless waves stroke a sandy canvas; Their inky swathes running off the page. Sandals lie like shipwrecks long forgotten, Left standing ragged and abandoned By their owner’s wanton toes.
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08-07-2012, 07:39 PM
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"Sandals lie like shipwrecks long forgotten"... love this line
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08-08-2012, 04:02 AM
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If I could swim around naked in this poem, I totally would. Loved every word of it, the last line was an ideal finish. No nits.
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08-09-2012, 02:51 PM
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Cheers for commenting guys, much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it.
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08-10-2012, 11:39 AM
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This is really nice -- just shy of too pretty, I think. The flow and fluid language of this supports the idea. Refreshing.
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