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Old 07-18-2014, 11:36 AM
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When I said real fights I actually meant watching some martial art fight videos instead of watching fighting scenes in movies and comic books (like I usually do). XD

If I were to wait for a ''real'' fight to happen before my eyes here in Portugal, it'd take me forever. This is very peaceful in that sense.

I watched the video and I have to say it intimidated me a bit. Because there are so many consecutive fast movements. It'll be really difficult to write, but if I manage to do it, it'll be really cool. I can definitely see the difference between what I wrote and what I watched.

Thank you very much for sharing the video, it's a great reference. I'll study it religiously.

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