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Old 06-20-2006, 10:38 PM
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"Fire in the Head..." lines I was playin' with


Here are a few verses I was playin' around with earlier today...I don't know if I'll turn 'em into an actual song, but here they are anyway...

I got a fire in the head, man;
trippin' over my words,
talkin' to you
through a string-and-tin-cans
set to digital...
Is anything gettin' through?

My eyes are redder than my lips--
my sheep are waitin' on me;
Though I'm tired
I'm talkin' through the fire in my head
to you...
Is anything gettin' through?

(chorus)
Flowing like the Underworld
Nether regions of my mind
Ancestral darkness brings me light
The greenish sort, I find.
I talk to people what I know,
including you...
Is anything gettin' through?

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I realize I may not be the best lyricist in the world, but I figured I'd post my stuff here anyway...

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Kat ^.^ *redcat*

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thanks for the reminder...I've been doing a bit of my own writing, so getting over here has been a bit of a struggle...

It's beddy-bye time for me, though...

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No biggy bud, just trying to keep everyone and thing active. Lyrics is one of the slower forums, so I wanna fix it Nice song by the way, I like it. The tune played well with a few of the songs I was listening to while reading it.
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