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Old 10-07-2015, 11:39 AM
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We're All One
Like the yogis and gurus say
It's all one
Like the cosmologists say
Life feeds on life
Life feeds on nature
Life feeds on itself
Creature on creature

We're All One
Human race
One religion
Common fate
We're All One
Common goal
Web of life
Heart and soul

Monkeys, humans
We're related
Spiders, monkeys
Don't you hate it?
If We're All One
Why so different?
If We're All One
Why so separate?

We're All One
Human race
One religion
Common fate
We're All One
Common goal
Web of life
Heart and soul

Everyone influences everyone
Everyone is influenced by everyone
Everything reflects everything
Everything is reflected by everything

We're All One
Human race
One religion
Common fate
We're All One
Common goal
Web of life
Heart and soul

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Old 10-07-2015, 12:34 PM
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Peaceful is what i would describe this. Actually more like wondering why peace is so hard to achieve. I like the idea behind this a lot and couldn't agree more.

'Everyone influences everyone
Everyone is influenced by everyone
Everything reflects everything
Everything is reflected by everything'

that was the only part i felt should have been placed elsewhere or maybe written differently. But I'm not an expert this is just my opinion. It just feels like it doesn't fit but what it says clearly matters and compliments the rest of the poem. Either way this was an interesting read with a really good message.
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