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Old 05-12-2013, 03:10 AM
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Default Dear Juliet, Romeo is Dead


Love, its this the hour
and panic scared the wounded
My infection in this
I made for the two in both of us
When this is done ill be ripple away
Apologies, apologies
For my ghostly shame
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Its like climbing a flight of nightmares
She said to me
In all and wonder the dead be not ashamed from what shes seen
The tea cup has its ups and down
And the stolen poison is but a ring around the edge

She screams its worth it
This makes it bitter sweet to give to her
A mouth full of riddles for her insanity
And I'm sick of this ring around the candelabra

This is the make believe
This is the make believe
I tell her
This is reality against the fantasy
I've told her
Get a grip now
Stop telling lies

Where for out thou ghost of you now
Your roses fall like ashes
The memory is to fade and clash
Winter is kind and the snow is red
It lashes to the open heart
Invisible love takes my life
No apologies
Haunt me
Haunt me ever after

The dreams gave her black midnight wings
She said to me
Sleep walking her away in a fantasy she only cares to see
The thorns seem soft
And knife drives the hardest bargain against us

She cries for the enchanted
The carousal will surly make us sick
There are no breaks in killing this
We refused to let her go and in the end said a good bye

This is the make believe
This is the make believe
I tell her
This is reality against the fantasy
I've told her
Get a grip now
Stop telling lies

Where for out thou ghost of you now
your roses fall like ashes
The memory has ye to take me
Winter is kind and the snow is red
It lashes to the open heart
Invisible love takes my life
No apologies
Haunt me
Haunt me ever after

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Old 05-12-2013, 01:34 PM
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Poetic and showing a great deal of imagination. But if it is a song lyric, I'm not sure I could come up with a melody.
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Old 05-12-2013, 03:05 PM
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This song is tricky. And its made for a rock type of genre in music. The thing about this song is it has three and four POV. The start, is that of a man who has died and his feelings know after death. most the song is sung from a sisters POV. "This is the make believe against the fantasy" is told by the two girls parents. And "Juliet's" sister is agreeing with her parents saying "I've told her". The chorus is Juliets's voice. This is a twisted take on a love story I've done. about a family that moves into a home and their youngest is calming a man comes to see her when no one is looking and in her sleep. Her family is saying their all dreams and to stop speaking of the situation. And one day she is able to see her ghostly lover on top a flight of stairs and he pushes her down and kills her so he can be with her. If their was a music video to this song that is what you would see. I hope that explains thing more better. My work can be tricky.
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Sounds operatic
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Very Poetic! These are great lyrics!
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