I think this takes a postive twist on anger adn uses it as motivation and instead of remaining in a stupor like many of us tend to do. The only suggestion I have is changing one word in the last stanza before the last chorus repeat.
And all the while your mind was jailed
Trying to keep me down
And from you Iíll never run
My ride through life has just begun
I think you
should be changed to it
, because I thought you were refering to the person in the beginning and it made me a little confused. With it, it draws from the statement before about your mind and not the person holding you down.
Other than that....I loved it, keep pumping those babies out!