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Old 07-24-2006, 09:17 PM
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Past anger in my life and my friend kind of inspired this song...


All The Way
As everyoneís eyes were all on me
I was all that I could ever be
And while you were gone and doing wrong
I was steady and I was strong

And you tried to hold me back
But I escaped from your attack
I learned the only way to be free
Was for myself to believe in me

Chorus
And Iíve dreamed of more than this
Of a life I will not miss
A life that is my own
And Iíll do what I know I can
Iíll hold the world within my hands
I dream of whatís not shown
Iíll make it all the way

And while I was hiding from it all
It was you who kept me small, but
Donít you try to change my mind
Iím searching for better things to find

I try to dream of better things
Somehow pretend my heart has wings
And fly away
See how far Iíll get today

Chorus

In myself, faith never failed
In the clouds, my spirit sailed
And all the while your mind was jailed
Trying to keep me down
And from you Iíll never run
My ride through life has just begun
And I know that I have won
Cause I will never drown

And Iíve dreamed of more than this
Of a life I will not miss
A life that is my own
And Iíll do what I know I can
Iíll hold the world within my hands
I dream of whatís not shown
Iíll make it all the way
I will take this all the way
I will seize the dayÖ

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Old 07-26-2006, 12:03 PM
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I think this takes a postive twist on anger adn uses it as motivation and instead of remaining in a stupor like many of us tend to do. The only suggestion I have is changing one word in the last stanza before the last chorus repeat.

And all the while your mind was jailed
Trying to keep me down
And from you Iíll never run
My ride through life has just begun

I think you should be changed to it, because I thought you were refering to the person in the beginning and it made me a little confused. With it, it draws from the statement before about your mind and not the person holding you down.

Other than that....I loved it, keep pumping those babies out!
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Old 07-27-2006, 10:21 PM
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Lol, well thank you Sketch. I will definitely see what I can do with this one, and hopefully come up with some more like this one.
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The chorus really tied me to this song. One of them nice hardcore alternative songs you'd hear just at the right moment. Nice work.
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