Broken route, impaired retention(work in progress)

[MJ-meo-dmt]

# I thought I'll post a song in working

The first section I wrote just now, so over time I'll to build it into something...
No idea what it means as of present. But surely I guess over time it would.

- Thoughts on this:
- Lame way we as humans follow the same rhyme
- My life, things I did, do wish I had done
- If we stand together maybe we can win over the life 'God' had in mind, instead we live under this dark cloud, the suffering and total human annihilation that the 'darkness' have in mind..

- and some other shit.. btw all this is (me) so anyone is welcome to add & share some ideas thoughts....

- PS. This is raw, i didn't even do any edits yet.. and I'm not even sure this would be everything...

= Let me know if I should remove the old writes...

= Second edit:
# Broken route, impaired retention


Standing back again at the point I began
wanting to know what and where went wrong
Please help me, save me from this
I can see that nothing counts for what I done
its all just godforsaken


Angel tell me what I have done,
devil tell me what I do
God show me what should have been done
darkness still under toe dieing none


We say a prayer
a petition, the request, supplication for me
we among those that stand
in between useless are blinded


lets walk and show them
the way it's clear with no more fear
we can conquer the way
the way pain seem to claim
among those, souls among them
we are all even, just the same


all the same inside, inside out
all the same inside, outside in
all the same...
driven to rich, power, ego dazzled


let's be brave and join together
walk up to them, in their face we place
the rules we know, pray, for we stow
annihilation



= First write:
# Broken route, impaired retention

Standing back again at the point I began
wanting to know what and where went wrong
Please help me please save me from this
I can see know that nothing counts for what I do
its all just a waste


instead we say a prayer
a prayer, a prayer, prayer for me
we among those that stand
in between useless are blind


lets walk and show them
the way it's clear with no more fear
we can conquer the way
the way pain seem to claim
among those, souls among them
we are all even, just the same


all the same inside, inside out
all the same inside, outside in
all the same...
driven to rich, power, ego blind


let's be brave and join together
walk up to them, in their face we place
the rules we know, we pray, for we stow

[morpheme]

I like this....a lot!