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06-12-2012, 06:45 AM
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Your Face
This one is a work in progress.
On a cloudy day Through the rain I can I can I can see your face And I know your pain Because All through the years of tears and shame All through your sick and twisted games I can see your face and i know I know Your pain Your pain I know I know On a cloudy day Through the rain I can see your face And i know your pain 
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06-12-2012, 07:16 AM
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Great.
That touches my heart.
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06-12-2012, 07:19 AM
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That's why i do it.
I tried to sing it several times but i cant play and sing at the same time.
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09-06-2012, 10:31 AM
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Beautifully meaningful. I like it very much.
 Ahhhhh coffee.
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12-11-2012, 06:41 AM
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This is phenomenal! It's so minimalistic, but says everything that needs to be said!
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"I'm a tulip in a cup, I stand no chance of growing up."- Fiona Apple
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12-15-2012, 02:45 PM
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This is actually kind of nice.You have a sense of subtlety most people on this sight lack. i can't wait till i can post my work
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