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Old 09-18-2016, 02:08 AM
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Okay thanks. I am wanting to write to write it all out but so far people I have asked said that the villain and the MC are stupid and that the idea wouldn't work.

The villain is stupid for trying to rape a cop, and the cop is stupid for falling for it, and the whole idea that something like this would happen is just not believable for a story. What do you think?
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