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Old 09-02-2017, 06:55 PM
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Thanks Grace. I found all that stuff and fixed.

The story is twice as long as I posted. More mysteries and oddities but nowhere near a conclusion.

I like the idea about torturing this guy for sport. It's not what I usually write but Halloween is coming up, so...
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