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Old 04-20-2017, 03:04 AM
IanG (Offline)
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I don't agree that we should be writing 'said' most of the time. The English language is noted for its rich vocabulary so let's make use of it. Some will critisise you for repeating words too much and you won't please everyone.

'what bugged the rest of the family that...' insert 'was' after 'family.'

'Marge being'... shouldn't there be a 'was' after Marge?

I hope this helps.
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