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Old 01-05-2016, 07:15 PM
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Hi IZA.

My realization that she wasn't real came on me slowly. In fact, it was close to the end. The effect wasn't like a twist, but rather a slow dawning.

I didn't like the MC much. Very self preoccupied. How did he come to be so rich to indulge in any car/boat whim? And he never accepts that he was the cause of her death.

I normally don't intrude my ideas in others work. But what if she was waiting for him in the car? And was still indifferent to him?

Keep 'em coming.

Have a nice writing day.
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