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Old 12-09-2014, 01:21 PM
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I just took a quick look and I think I'm going to make him Air Force, some how, and Marietta is 70k people and I think a city that size could pay an assistant chief. The Air Force base close is just an extra.
the size of the town I thought a problem and so I picked a large town but didn't like the idea, I was going to have him just operate in a smaller area, but it think this will be better.

thanks for the heads up.

I guess that's another point, at this point in the writing you can make changes without causing to much trouble.

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