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Old 09-08-2017, 09:07 AM
SecretDurham (Offline)
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Dialogue.

Sometimes can't get it to flow right, and it seems strained.

Characters.

Getting the right feel for them, who they are and what they are likely to say.

World building.

Descriptions don't always go down too well, Purple Prose shows its face to annoy me.

Quite a lot when i think about it... Haha!

Aporica "Don't give up, just give in. Give in to what your head says, clean it up later."

"Thanks for that, Aporica. Will do!"
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