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Forum: Poetry 02-09-2008, 10:16 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 724
Posted By Lime & Tequila
I enjoyed this. I think it would be a cool...

I enjoyed this. I think it would be a cool chapter heading or part of a series of intriguing animal fables. I guess what I'm saying, it's intriguing enough that yes, I do want more. But it's good...
Forum: Free Writing 02-04-2008, 02:37 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 889
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Nadia, I like that kind of critique. I...

Nadia,

I like that kind of critique. I received extensive critiques to this piece earlier from some other people and I have it on my list of stories to rewrite. But once I get that taken care of,...
Forum: Poetry 01-27-2008, 01:16 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 721
Posted By Lime & Tequila
I doubt that I'll rewrite this one unless I get...

I doubt that I'll rewrite this one unless I get inspired. It was primarily done for family this past Christmas.

I appreciate the advice and wisdom from all.

Peace,


L&T
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-18-2008, 06:14 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,894
Posted By Lime & Tequila
I like the new look. But I'll be honest, the...

I like the new look. But I'll be honest, the color puts me to sleep. Don't change it on my account, it won't keep me away. But I wanted to register my opinion (shades of pink probably wasn't going to...
Forum: Poetry 01-16-2008, 08:09 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 721
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Thank you _Zeb_, I appreciate the kind...

Thank you _Zeb_,

I appreciate the kind words.

Peace,

L&T
Forum: Poetry 01-15-2008, 10:20 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 721
Posted By Lime & Tequila
A man I knew

He liked to sit and rock his chair,
sometimes pretend I wasn't there.
No longer liked conversation,
too much hearing aid frustration.

But then he might start to fumble,
searching through...
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-14-2008, 12:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 643
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Oh my, oh my! Hysterically funny. Not just a...

Oh my, oh my! Hysterically funny. Not just a vegetable cracker, but a potentially deadly vegetable cracker. Perhaps Piranha Cracker's aren't quite as misnamed as they initially appear.

L&T
Forum: Introductions 01-14-2008, 12:35 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,263
Posted By Lime & Tequila
You've come to the write place in my opinion....

You've come to the write place in my opinion. Welcome aboard.

Peace,

L&T
Forum: Poetry 01-14-2008, 11:55 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,213
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Horrible subject, nicely addressed poem. I'm not...

Horrible subject, nicely addressed poem. I'm not sure whether I liked the poem, because the subject matter made me shudder so. It definitely brought about an emotional reaction in reading it.
...
Forum: Poetry 01-14-2008, 11:53 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 837
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Gary, I won't offer any specific critiques....

Gary,

I won't offer any specific critiques. I'm late to the party and what's been said before covers far better any points I might make. So I'll just say I enjoyed the read and smiled at the...
Forum: Introductions 01-11-2008, 09:26 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 864
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Lauren, I'm thrilled to see you over here!...

Lauren,

I'm thrilled to see you over here! Peek around and don't be shy about commenting on other's work. We're all learning here (though a few people are learning way above my own level).

I...
Forum: Fiction 01-11-2008, 12:47 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,369
Posted By Lime & Tequila
I have no particular critiques to offer. I...

I have no particular critiques to offer. I enjoyed the story. The beginning was a bit slow, but the dialog drew me in and I soon found myself at the story's end.

Thank you for the enjoyable read!...
Forum: Poetry 01-10-2008, 06:30 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 710
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Thank you all for the comments. I won't respond...

Thank you all for the comments. I won't respond immediately to any specific critiques, but I take them all seriously and am playing around with them now, trying out revisions.

Peace,


L&T
Forum: Poetry 01-10-2008, 11:59 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 710
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Last Tear Cried

Last Tear Cried


Oh dad, you call her baby and your princess.
Guess you would hate the way that she behaved,
the stupid choices, things she did to impress.
Fourteen is young for what she...
Forum: Poetry 01-10-2008, 11:55 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 880
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Quite thought provoking in this modern age. The...

Quite thought provoking in this modern age. The capitals did not bother me, but I truly don't think they added anything to the look, feel, or meaning of the poem. So I tend to agree with the earlier...
Forum: Poetry 01-09-2008, 06:37 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,478
Posted By Lime & Tequila
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It has a very...

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It has a very natural feel. I utterly believed the reality of this piece. And just to weigh in briefly on the settled aught issue, its a lovely read out loud and I...
Forum: Poetry 01-09-2008, 06:32 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,212
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Thank you! I appreciate the kind words. I know...

Thank you! I appreciate the kind words. I know the comments I got helped immensely in revising this piece.

Peace to all,

L&T
Forum: Poetry 01-07-2008, 04:47 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,212
Posted By Lime & Tequila
I'll try and answer among other questions, why...

I'll try and answer among other questions, why Norwegian. And I'll share my current draft. By the way, I very much appreciated all of the comments!

This is a poem that I've had fun playing with...
Forum: Poetry 01-04-2008, 11:37 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,212
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Lorlie, Thank you. I very much appreciate...

Lorlie,

Thank you. I very much appreciate your words. When I finish the revision I'll post it for sure.

I hope you and everyone else had a nice holiday. I know mine was very, very relaxing,...
Forum: Introductions 12-26-2007, 10:04 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 945
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Welcome, You've stumbled on a good place....

Welcome,

You've stumbled on a good place. You will no doubt get some critiques as you post, we all get them, it's a good thing. And if you do post and stick around, and listen, you'll find your...
Forum: Introductions 12-26-2007, 05:20 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,084
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Hello joyful girl called Xai Xai Xi, from...

Hello joyful girl called Xai Xai Xi,
from Frisco, a town I'd love to see.
give us XXX reviews
let us, your words peruse
and please find this a sweet spot to be!

Welcome! And how do you...
Forum: The Library 12-26-2007, 04:29 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,459
Posted By Lime & Tequila
Interesting, a bit Gothic sounding, most of the...

Interesting, a bit Gothic sounding, most of the the written blurb draws me in (well, the "unashamedly raunchy" reference makes me hesitate a bit, I'd probably find a different way to describe it,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-24-2007, 03:15 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,314
Posted By Lime & Tequila
I'm doing a roast, potatoes, carrots, stuffing,...

I'm doing a roast, potatoes, carrots, stuffing, asparagus, salad, biscuits, type meal—so not too traditional.

L&T
Forum: Poetry 12-24-2007, 10:16 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 834
Posted By Lime & Tequila
You try to convey a lot of strong, dark emotion...

You try to convey a lot of strong, dark emotion through this piece. Dorie spotted some typos that you should correct. It will make it easier for your readers to see what you want to say, because they...
Forum: Poetry 12-23-2007, 09:02 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,212
Posted By Lime & Tequila
QW, Thank you for the comments. I do feel it...

QW,

Thank you for the comments. I do feel it needs at least one more stanza. I wrote four more lines, but I need to let them age a bit as I ponder whether they are correct. It's a balance, how...
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