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Forum: Fiction 09-06-2017, 07:16 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 589
Posted By mandapanda
I generally find reading about someone's morning...

I generally find reading about someone's morning very boring but this was not boring at all. I wanted it to keep going! You have a good voice in writing
Forum: Introductions 10-03-2016, 03:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 730
Posted By mandapanda
The thing is I sometimes like knowing that it's...

The thing is I sometimes like knowing that it's going to end up the same every time. If I want a safe read, I go with romance. When I want something that could take a totally different turn that's...
Forum: Fiction 10-03-2016, 03:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 899
Posted By mandapanda
I really like the idea of that flashback. I've...

I really like the idea of that flashback. I've been toying with the idea of a flashback but hadn't really figured it out. That might be a good way to go to get a little emotion in the readers which...
Forum: Fiction 10-03-2016, 03:44 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 899
Posted By mandapanda
This is certainly something I will have to...

This is certainly something I will have to explain. Unfortunately that's a small-scale problem that I just haven't figured out yet or decided to change if it doesn't work because there are some...
Forum: Fiction 10-03-2016, 03:41 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 899
Posted By mandapanda
I thank you all for the feedback.. part of the...

I thank you all for the feedback.. part of the reason I posted a synopsis instead of a chapter is to look at any plot holes and that is definitely helping with my further writing! I will most...
Forum: Fiction 09-27-2016, 02:20 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 899
Posted By mandapanda
I'll definitely take that into account. I wanted...

I'll definitely take that into account. I wanted to explain at some point in the novel that the forest god took a human form to be more human and do things that humans do... I'll definitely be...
Forum: Scripts 09-26-2016, 06:51 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 3,426
Posted By mandapanda
I would be willing to provide feedback for you!

I would be willing to provide feedback for you!
Forum: Fiction 09-26-2016, 06:37 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 899
Posted By mandapanda
Fantasy fiction I am writing, need feedback

So I'm in the middle of the first draft of my novel, which I would classify in the genre fantasy fiction.

I wanted to get some feedback on a short synopsis of my novel to see if people would want...
Forum: Introductions 09-26-2016, 02:48 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,635
Posted By mandapanda
I am wondering... why Memphis?

I am wondering... why Memphis?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-20-2016, 08:01 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,316
Posted By mandapanda
This has happened many times. I prefer to bring...

This has happened many times. I prefer to bring wine into the shower with me, the whole bottle. Which sounds terrible, but my creativity just flows then!
Forum: Fiction 09-20-2016, 07:46 PM
Replies: 75
Views: 9,187
Posted By mandapanda
I would most definitely keep reading. In the...

I would most definitely keep reading. In the beginning the chapters were very short and there was no way to really connect with that kid, I feel like just a little more with the kid would be good...
Forum: Introductions 09-20-2016, 07:39 PM
Replies: 10
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Views: 1,948
Posted By mandapanda
I find that reading from a lot of genres and...

I find that reading from a lot of genres and reading when you aren't writing can be very useful! I read somewhere that although good writing is unique in its own way, all good writers steal from...
Forum: Introductions 09-20-2016, 07:36 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,635
Posted By mandapanda
Icon7 Hi all, I'm Amanda!

I just wanted to post here to introduce myself a little bit. I've been writing for years for small things but actually just took on a much bigger project (fictional novel) which is a little scary...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 09-07-2016, 05:21 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 5,493
Posted By mandapanda
I really like the word play here!

I really like the word play here!
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