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Forum: Fiction 02-01-2013, 08:30 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 642
Posted By Gej
As mentioned above by someone else your dialogue...

As mentioned above by someone else your dialogue is excellent. A couple of times I had to reread a part to confirm who said it but other than that it was fluid, which is a hard thing to do.

I'm no...
Forum: Fiction 02-01-2013, 08:18 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,285
Posted By Gej
As most have already mentioned the vagueness is...

As most have already mentioned the vagueness is endearing. Your first couple of sentences made me want to read on.

I also did get a little lost when the second character was looking at her...
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-21-2013, 02:50 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,589
Posted By Gej
Judgemental much? I said nothing of my personal...

Judgemental much? I said nothing of my personal life, so making snide comments about it's a bit juvenile don't you think?

To deny something it must first exist, I see no reason to believe in the...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 01-13-2013, 03:05 PM
Replies: 69
Views: 21,565
Posted By Gej
Dear me, I'm writing to you as a...

Dear me,

I'm writing to you as a reminder of the mind state you had before this all unfolded. Before the treatments before the hair loss before the vomiting before the talk of a faceless...
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-13-2013, 04:13 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,589
Posted By Gej
Your perspective got a little mixed up, then you...

Your perspective got a little mixed up, then you wheeled around entirely with this last paragraph.

You had a 'Golem' moment "take all the honour and glory... and claims it for themselves" that was...
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