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Forum: Fiction 10-06-2013, 07:40 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 423
Posted By Willow Caplan
First Four Chapters of "Life and War"

Life and War

Chapter One- War
All I remember was war.
I stood in a sea of dirt and metal. And men. Men running in gray and tan, the flash of silver being all anyone would ever know of them....
Forum: Members' Choice 08-08-2013, 11:58 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 8,379
Posted By Willow Caplan
The apology- a short drabble by Synch ...

The apology- a short drabble by Synch

http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=47186
Forum: Fiction 08-08-2013, 10:04 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,089
Posted By Willow Caplan
I thought the beginning really set a nice,...

I thought the beginning really set a nice, menacing mood for the scene, but it seemed a little bit like another teenage James Bond TV show. The entire story was very vague as well.

It does have...
Forum: Fiction 08-08-2013, 09:34 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,538
Posted By Willow Caplan
I really liked reading that. I love the way you...

I really liked reading that. I love the way you made the choppy sentences flow. I loved the way you kept to a dark, lonely tune. I loved the descriptiveness. I loved the tempo. I think you could have...
Forum: Fiction 08-08-2013, 09:12 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,061
Posted By Willow Caplan
Ok, thank you.

Ok, thank you.
Forum: Fiction 08-08-2013, 09:06 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,061
Posted By Willow Caplan
Rincewind, age isn't a competition. AnyaKimlun,...

Rincewind, age isn't a competition. AnyaKimlun, thank you. I think its going to take a couple more years, though.
Forum: Fiction 08-08-2013, 06:57 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,061
Posted By Willow Caplan
I understand that it is really confusing. Maybe...

I understand that it is really confusing. Maybe its just me but I like confusing beginnings because it hooks me. It does clear up a bit more in the third and fourth chapters as the plot progresses,...
Forum: Fiction 08-07-2013, 01:45 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,061
Posted By Willow Caplan
First Two Chapters of "Life and War"

These are the first two chapters from a book I am writing called Life and War until I come up with a better title.
Please reply and tell me what you think. I'd love all the help and suggestions I...
Forum: Introductions 08-07-2013, 01:39 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 920
Posted By Willow Caplan
Hi and welcome Good luck on your novel

Hi and welcome
Good luck on your novel
Forum: Introductions 08-07-2013, 01:38 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 760
Posted By Willow Caplan
Hi Luis! Welcome

Hi Luis!
Welcome
Forum: Introductions 08-07-2013, 01:37 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,068
Posted By Willow Caplan
Nice to meet you! I'm a newbie as well. ...

Nice to meet you!
I'm a newbie as well.
Welcome
Forum: Introductions 08-07-2013, 01:35 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 903
Posted By Willow Caplan
Nice to meet you Gail!

Nice to meet you Gail!
Forum: Introductions 08-07-2013, 01:33 PM
Replies: 2
Hi
Views: 342
Posted By Willow Caplan
Hi

Hi

I guess my love for writing brought me here.

Uh... I don't really know exactly how this works....

My pen name is Willow Caplan.
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