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Forum: Poetry 11-25-2017, 01:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 382
Posted By Juilingstar177
After a very long time to this forum. Hello!

As teenager, I loved that superflous style,
but slowly I learned to be humble and kind.
I was once out of control, a raging breast
now a quiet docile and white doe
writing now here in...
Forum: Fiction 09-08-2016, 02:15 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,787
Posted By Juilingstar177
I respect this piece. This piece is a thing to...

I respect this piece. This piece is a thing to davor like a feast for a reader and Because this piece feels so personal for the writer I don't dare (or don't want) to say anything else except it...
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2016, 02:09 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 568
Posted By Juilingstar177
Simple and great. Deep metaphorical meaning which...

Simple and great. Deep metaphorical meaning which is beautifully depicted. But won't it be better if you posted it like this?

Even the devils dance,
when the gods come to play,
encircling the...
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2016, 02:03 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 788
Posted By Juilingstar177
Neat. Its been quite a long time... I have...

Neat. Its been quite a long time... I have being so rarely active... but this place keeps up the great poems. :).
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2016, 02:00 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 601
Posted By Juilingstar177
Words

The words never lie. They stand tall and long.
They can never hide. What is there it is and there.
You cannot take them back. You cannot eat them.
perfume them, make them sound good, make them...
Forum: Poetry 02-19-2016, 04:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 665
Posted By Juilingstar177
First, I was not copying Nacia, and I was not...

First, I was not copying Nacia, and I was not begging for it.

Music is lost, -> The charm of the life is lost,
Silence is cry -> And what remains is noisy and sad -> like a cry.

...
Forum: Poetry 02-07-2016, 01:20 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 665
Posted By Juilingstar177
Reply!

Reply!
Forum: Poetry 02-06-2016, 05:13 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 391
Posted By Juilingstar177
I know this too will come to pass Nothing does...

I know this too will come to pass
Nothing does last like it should,
How long has it been since that summer abroad,
So high above the city we stood, If you connect this sentence to rest of the poem...
Forum: Poetry 02-06-2016, 04:57 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 453
Posted By Juilingstar177
It starts well, but deteriorate as we go by,...

It starts well, but deteriorate as we go by, maybe you can try, IZA to decorate the last part a bit?
Forum: Poetry 02-06-2016, 04:52 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,278
Posted By Juilingstar177
Nick... ok... that one incident is not very...

Nick... ok... that one incident is not very universal...? Maybe I should say you are getting obsessive. ;)
Forum: Poetry 02-06-2016, 04:47 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 665
Posted By Juilingstar177
Present. Absent, and unknown.

Words have gone and same repeat,
what remains is coal and peat,
behind I see is thorny fields
and before me is misty dreams.

Remains lad lap remains unseen,
I troll and stumble through...
Forum: Fiction 02-03-2016, 10:32 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 626
Posted By Juilingstar177
Lovely perfection beautiful

Lovely perfection

beautiful
Forum: Fiction 02-03-2016, 10:28 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 774
Posted By Juilingstar177
You were trying to say? I got the jest of the...

You were trying to say? I got the jest of the scenerio and your rhythmn and sound and technique. you are using a irony here for the thoughts of the reader but I didn't get the finer details. And yes...
Forum: Poetry 02-03-2016, 10:08 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 567
Posted By Juilingstar177
sorry

sorry
Forum: Poetry 02-03-2016, 10:07 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 567
Posted By Juilingstar177
Fairly It was about freedom fighting and about...

Fairly It was about freedom fighting and about motherland but then I didn't had a good feeling abt making it public, so I made a lame excuse and cut out
Forum: Poetry 02-03-2016, 07:32 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 459
Posted By Juilingstar177
Magical demise of musical world

Brushed through the fingers
the river flowed like essense known
the river is the in the blood
love of it with the sunshine of the river.
*
Darkness burns with light,
and soul like the danger...
Forum: Board Games 02-01-2016, 07:37 AM
Replies: 9,470
Views: 207,011
Posted By Juilingstar177
turn 360 degrees

turn 360 degrees
Forum: Poetry 02-01-2016, 07:27 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 567
Posted By Juilingstar177
Freedom.

Ok sorry, but I posted it, and then I got gossebumps - very strong message. So removing it sorry
Forum: Poetry 12-12-2014, 06:40 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 418
Posted By Juilingstar177
Icon7 Today is the beautiful time

Time took my childhood, as I grew stronger
I lost my words, my words do not seem to fit together
they are jumbled mess, too long is my sentence
my dreams desires beautiful colors, all crashing...
Forum: Poetry 11-25-2014, 10:53 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 343
Posted By Juilingstar177
Icon4 Today is a beautiful time

Switched on heater, red incident light,
glowed with beautiful crimson bright,
I heated up my wet stocks (wore them to bathroom),
and sat down dizzy and fool.

The night was long, I couldn't...
Forum: Poetry 11-14-2014, 12:47 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 398
Posted By Juilingstar177
tear

hyacinth of webs, I brush apart. That little touch of finger broke the thousand years old antiquity. I cleaned the old claims and myths, the bricks strengthened over the years, claimed truth by...
Forum: Poetry 10-04-2013, 08:47 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 629
Posted By Juilingstar177
This poem basically speaks of the relationship...

This poem basically speaks of the relationship between the soul and the "body", and then its relationship with the world. Further generalisation of the theme of the poem is not easy even for me, as...
Forum: Poetry 10-01-2013, 09:32 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 629
Posted By Juilingstar177
A late submission, and a bow

let me speak no more,
and I shall fade to non
but my hungry soul will
be still in the rocky stones,
to speak its heart out,
may echo through.

A body of rocks
manifested of thoughts~...
Forum: Poetry 06-09-2013, 08:28 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 424
Posted By Juilingstar177
Thank you.

Thank you.
Forum: Poetry 06-05-2013, 10:58 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 424
Posted By Juilingstar177
Basic Triad

Devoid of all externa,
He did He, swinged in thoughts,
Who can tap this unseen evergreens?
A matrix of cool misty fields

Omega

Logic shall be tested again and again
and Logic and Logic...
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