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Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 08:10 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,111
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Thanks, Andy for a thorough critique. I...

Thanks, Andy for a thorough critique.

I believe that the astrophysicist is more scared than brave. This is his bravest moment and he can't muster up the courage to give out all the details. I...
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 02:43 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,111
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
The series lives and breathes on anonymity of the...

The series lives and breathes on anonymity of the characters, but I do agree that I could have given more credibility to the astrophysicist. You'll notice that none of the characters in the whole...
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 11:16 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,796
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
There is something wrong with you and rhetoric,...

There is something wrong with you and rhetoric, friend. You critique the critiques more than the stories. It's kind of sad.
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 11:14 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,111
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Discordia's original story "Zero" sort-of went...

Discordia's original story "Zero" sort-of went into the fact that the end will happen on day zero. When I asked to write a sequel, the writer informed me that he would like to keep how the end of the...
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 09:54 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,796
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
No, absolutely not. I'm sick and tired of people...

No, absolutely not. I'm sick and tired of people like you who like to criticize the critics of the stories more than the story itself. How about you let that go? You and all the others who cannot...
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 09:51 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,747
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Ok, so how do I warn the moderators that the...

Ok, so how do I warn the moderators that the poster of this story did not have the required number of posts before posting a story?
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 09:16 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,111
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
This series as a whole is sort of like a...

This series as a whole is sort of like a quasi-fan-fiction thingamajigger. Feel free to write your own take on the storyline. All me and Discordia ask is that you send it to either his or my inbox...
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 09:12 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,111
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Haha, according to Discordia (the writer who...

Haha, according to Discordia (the writer who started the series before handing it off to me), the event is never to be fully revealed. All we know (as I, too, was once a reader of the story Zero) is...
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 09:08 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,796
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Funny though that you say that and all I read is...

Funny though that you say that and all I read is "I'm a complete snob who presses the report post button more than the Thanks button". It says I'm FROM Canada, not the Deep South. Way to do some...
Forum: Fiction 01-10-2011, 09:05 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,747
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Just addressing the rules and the fact that they...

Just addressing the rules and the fact that they were broken and that no one seems to have an issue with that. I mean, that is the rule isn't it? Five posts than post a story? Or did I just make that...
Forum: Fiction 01-09-2011, 11:34 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,111
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Icon2 Three Hundred and Sixty-Five (Prequel to One and Zero [by Discordia]) (934 Words)

Piece: Three Hundred and Sixty-Five

Genre: Observational

Word Count: 934

This is a prequel/sequel to the first two stories of the Discordia storyline started in "Zero". I have posted links...
Forum: Fiction 01-09-2011, 10:14 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,747
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Hey, how about getting five posts before posting...

Hey, how about getting five posts before posting your first story? Ok, thanks.
Forum: Fiction 01-09-2011, 10:13 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 5,096
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
This is a good attempt at the superhero story,...

This is a good attempt at the superhero story, which you don't see much of in the short story format. You don't see it much outside of comics and film. And I think you really showed a little reason...
Forum: Fiction 01-09-2011, 06:13 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,796
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
I'm not from the Deep South, I live in Texas...

I'm not from the Deep South, I live in Texas currently. I'm a Canadian by birth. Always remember how to spell assume.
Forum: Fiction 01-08-2011, 09:30 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,796
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
I was saying he should get a moderator to move...

I was saying he should get a moderator to move it. It's not that bad of a story; just saying that as a responsible poster, he should try to not go knee-deep into what is or isn't risque and post the...
Forum: Fiction 01-08-2011, 08:57 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,796
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
I truly feel like there is no substance here;...

I truly feel like there is no substance here; just good ol' fashioned perverseness. I'm not going to criticize your story- it's solid and your narrator's sentence structure and lexicon is steady and...
Forum: Fiction 01-08-2011, 08:51 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,859
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
You've got the basis for a good story here, but...

You've got the basis for a good story here, but your craft needs work. You have choppy sentences and you can expand more larger on the story itself instead of cutting to your next twist or point. You...
Forum: Fiction 01-07-2011, 11:54 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 746
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
You'll get more replies if you make your text...

You'll get more replies if you make your text spaced out between paragraphs. Makes it easier to read. I know I will if you do.
Forum: Fiction 01-06-2011, 04:40 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 706
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
I will read this story as soon as you make it to...

I will read this story as soon as you make it to be unblocked. Reading it in this fashion is very frustrating. Thanks ahead of time.
Forum: Fiction 01-06-2011, 04:39 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 547
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
I couldn't really get a definite feel for the...

I couldn't really get a definite feel for the setting here. You made a few references to the football field and the weather, but I couldn't tell where we were (town, decade, time period). That can...
Forum: Fiction 01-03-2011, 08:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 574
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
What the fuck is wrong with you, seriously?

What the fuck is wrong with you, seriously?
Forum: Fiction 01-03-2011, 11:57 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,924
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Well written piece of semi-erotica, I thought....

Well written piece of semi-erotica, I thought. You really do pace well and that's good for a story this short, as in number of words short, not 'no-storyline' short. I would hate to read a story with...
Forum: Fiction 01-02-2011, 12:09 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 951
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
It's all good in the hood, y'all.

It's all good in the hood, y'all.
Forum: Fiction 12-30-2010, 02:02 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 951
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Just hearing that my writing is good and coherent...

Just hearing that my writing is good and coherent is enough.
What does 'zero post' mean? That no one has commented on it? That's acceptable. People have read and, since they didn't comment, I...
Forum: Fiction 12-29-2010, 12:11 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,606
Posted By TuxedoBoonee
Didn't really see a story here. Kind of misplaced...

Didn't really see a story here. Kind of misplaced in the fiction section.
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