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Forum: Fiction 07-22-2013, 03:07 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 619
Posted By SadLoner
thanks for the sweet review Hayl ! really really...

thanks for the sweet review Hayl ! really really glad me:biggrin:
i'll edit the first sentence you wished were more clarifying.as per the other one,i like it the way it is.feels old-fashionedly...
Forum: Fiction 07-15-2013, 06:53 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 619
Posted By SadLoner
saccharine overdose?i know buddy.:p i aimed at a...

saccharine overdose?i know buddy.:p i aimed at a satire and ended up writing a supersugarsyrupy piece that makes you puke.i am not gonna change this one though.it's special to me in ways i can't...
Forum: Fiction 07-12-2013, 01:28 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 619
Posted By SadLoner
Love Story

LOVE STORY

She had long known that someday, she would have her happily ever- -after. She would meet her soul-mate, sacred Love would blossom at first sight and they would tie the knot no sooner...
Forum: Poetry 06-22-2013, 11:45 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 374
Posted By SadLoner
thanks for critiquing my oddball Nee.i wrote in a...

thanks for critiquing my oddball Nee.i wrote in a complete rush,so it came up pretty crude.even now after working upon your suggestion, I couldn't make any satisfactory changes.hope this one is not...
Forum: Poetry 06-22-2013, 11:44 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 374
Posted By SadLoner
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Forum: Poetry 06-22-2013, 09:19 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 374
Posted By SadLoner
Ex Defectu

Palaces in my head
Drippin' like a child’s goo
So I try philosophy
A bit of religion
Hell, a bit of everything cheap
For a penurious mind
Until my satori comes
Crawlin' in scribbles---...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-27-2013, 07:49 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,425
Posted By SadLoner
i referred to whatever prescription prevalent in...

i referred to whatever prescription prevalent in society at a particular point of time meant for everybody barring psychopaths of course.like some justify bloodshed in name of religion, but i am sure...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-25-2013, 02:57 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,425
Posted By SadLoner
we do something wrong, repent, do something wrong...

we do something wrong, repent, do something wrong again, which might be a repetition, simulation or wholly new. but how long that contrition influences our thoughts and actions?we fall back to the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-21-2013, 07:07 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,425
Posted By SadLoner
higher existence and hypocrisy

have you ever thought of some form of higher existence?not like renunciation of this material plane and becoming an austere ascetic, but living with some higher ideals in this rut. what are your...
Forum: Previous Contests 03-18-2013, 11:37 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 4,383
Posted By SadLoner
Watermark

An accidental ripple
Waiting
For the next tide to pull me
Into His infinite embrace.
Forum: Poetry 03-14-2013, 10:48 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 262
Posted By SadLoner
Terminal

TERMINAL

They fixed me up
With a drunkard’s dexterous fingers
And I look damn damn good
A collage of broken bones, dry scarlet smudged
Like lipstick of a bipolar lover
A modern art all...
Forum: Poetry 12-20-2012, 06:12 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 486
Posted By SadLoner
The 4th stanza painted a powerfully poignant...

The 4th stanza painted a powerfully poignant image in my head..lovely read.
Forum: Poetry 12-16-2012, 06:28 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 387
Posted By SadLoner
Of Demented Love

His name's stuck
Like some ungodly fish bone
In my heart's chattering teeth.
Forum: Poetry 11-26-2012, 02:23 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 283
Posted By SadLoner
Yet Another Hybrid Theory

When there’s nothin’ else to boast of
They rant ‘bout BE-ing the glorious legit children
Poor idiots know not
That there’s none but us hybrids
In this blistering blizzard of a planet--
‘Cause...
Forum: Poetry 08-16-2012, 05:58 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 230
Posted By SadLoner
Papyrus

PAPYRUS

She humbly submits
To my cosmic fits,
She—
The silent, secluded playground
Of a bipolar child.
Sullies her
My frenzied Vulcan soul
With passions wreck’d
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-07-2012, 02:33 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,429
Posted By SadLoner
Wow Ilseum,you really make one feel better.I have...

Wow Ilseum,you really make one feel better.I have already taken a leaf outta your book.Though there's no one right now cept my parents who can tell what's ok in my life,I've decided to do that...
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2012, 01:15 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 379
Posted By SadLoner
Your cold enigma plays tangent with my head, o...

Your cold enigma plays tangent with my head, o William Sparta.
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2012, 01:05 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 386
Posted By SadLoner
agree with Ryan.don't get the last part.

agree with Ryan.don't get the last part.
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2012, 01:04 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,153
Posted By SadLoner
Never saw such a beautiful piece about trees...

Never saw such a beautiful piece about trees before.
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2012, 01:00 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 2,320
Posted By SadLoner
I can't give any critique that's gonna actually...

I can't give any critique that's gonna actually help you with the flow,structure,etc. as i'm myself standing on the threshold of poetry and its intricacies.I liked the concept-it's not exactly...
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2012, 12:52 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 424
Posted By SadLoner
cool blend.love it.

cool blend.love it.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-07-2012, 12:47 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,429
Posted By SadLoner
In my case,depressive periods are unfailingly...

In my case,depressive periods are unfailingly accompanied my writers' block.Any extreme emotion,whether happiness or anguish don't inspire me at all,mind goes miraculously blank at those times.I...
Forum: Board Games 07-05-2012, 05:07 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 9,883
Posted By SadLoner
It's scarily cute and pretty much looks like my...

It's scarily cute and pretty much looks like my face.9;)
Forum: Board Games 07-05-2012, 05:03 AM
Replies: 60
Views: 3,590
Posted By SadLoner
Today I discovered board games here at WB.They...

Today I discovered board games here at WB.They are AMAZING:clap:
Forum: Board Games 07-05-2012, 04:59 AM
Replies: 13,574
Views: 207,900
Posted By SadLoner
party's on again!:cheers2: 1

party's on again!:cheers2:

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