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Forum: Character Clinics 02-28-2014, 05:59 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 4,484
Posted By Rocko
Hi sweetie? Thanks for taking interest in my...

Hi sweetie? Thanks for taking interest in my seeking-a-wife ad. Have been at it since age twenty and you, my unique and precious jewel, are my first and only response. Felt so happy that after almost...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-28-2014, 07:45 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,886
Posted By Rocko
I was merely following your supposedly helpful...

I was merely following your supposedly helpful advice.
Changed your mind?
No problemo compadre.

But if reader-response is your criteria for preventing deletion, then why prevent deletion of the...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2014, 09:19 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,886
Posted By Rocko
WritingThespian is right that there's 'writerly'...

WritingThespian is right that there's 'writerly' quality to the writing.
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Forum: Fiction 02-27-2014, 08:48 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 802
Posted By Rocko
Hi! Glad to help out. I agree, the effect of...

Hi!
Glad to help out. I agree, the effect of having a post repeatedly read but uncommented on can be negative.

 
About confusion while reading the piece, well, only at the start when it seems...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2014, 06:41 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 941
Posted By Rocko
. Thanks for the feedback Pandora! ...

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Thanks for the feedback Pandora!


The whole disaster could have been the explosive culmination of a relationship that had started to deteriorate as soon as it was formalized. My aunt was...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2014, 09:30 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 2,511
Posted By Rocko
Based on other UFO reports and my personal...

Based on other UFO reports and my personal encounter, it's hard to view them as benevolent.

1. Disrupting airport traffic.

2. Beaming lights on people without their consent.

3. Sinister...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2014, 08:32 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,913
Posted By Rocko
I already know how it works but thanks anyway.

I already know how it works but thanks anyway.
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2014, 08:18 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,913
Posted By Rocko
The Hadron collider is being used to determine...

The Hadron collider is being used to determine whether other dimensions exist or not based on the observed dissapearence of a subatomic particle.

Large Hadron Collider May Help Us Glimpse Into...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-27-2014, 08:10 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 2,511
Posted By Rocko
I thought experiences aren't fiction. But if you...

I thought experiences aren't fiction. But if you deem UFO experiences fiction, please feel free to move my thread to the fiction area.
Forum: Fiction 02-27-2014, 04:43 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 802
Posted By Rocko
Here are my suggestions: I would: ...

Here are my suggestions:


I would:

1. Change the intro so that R causes the silence in the car.

2. Have him act less adult at the outset.

3. Drastically reduce the number of times...
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-26-2014, 08:09 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,886
Posted By Rocko
Thanks for the feedback.

Thanks for the feedback.
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2014, 07:21 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 802
Posted By Rocko
Very interesting intro which lead me to expect...

Very interesting intro which lead me to expect the story to be about maladjusted M. But the story is about R. R came across as an adult at first with his driving, references to work schedules,...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2014, 04:21 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 804
Posted By Rocko
Here is some useful info. ...

Here is some useful info.
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Classification Word count
 
Novel over 40,000 words
 
Novella 17,500 to 40,000 words
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-26-2014, 03:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 941
Posted By Rocko
I'll send it to you via private mail.

I'll send it to you via private mail.
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-26-2014, 03:31 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 2,511
Posted By Rocko
I have only blacked out from drunkeness once and...

I have only blacked out from drunkeness once and it was when I was fifteen. Luckily it didn't happen while I was walking home at two in the morning by the interstate,[a shortcut] and climbed a...
Forum: Free Writing 02-26-2014, 02:53 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 750
Posted By Rocko
Nice and very thought-provoking. How often we...

Nice and very thought-provoking. How often we respond in ways we view as harmliess and unkowningly devastate a human life. If we could just be shown the consequences of our whimsical decisions we'd...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2014, 02:08 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 804
Posted By Rocko
I enjoyed the story. Man vs beast and nature! My...

I enjoyed the story. Man vs beast and nature! My favorite part is when the boys see the eyes and hear the breathing. The boys I couldn’t visualize because no physical description or age is mentioned....
Forum: Research Section 02-24-2014, 06:32 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 4,778
Posted By Rocko
Try using people you've personally known or...

Try using people you've personally known or encountered, such as family members, friends, fellow workers, fellow worshipers, celebrities, historical figures, and parts of yourself as your source for...
Forum: Research Section 02-24-2014, 06:20 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 5,164
Posted By Rocko
English to English translation of Igbo ...

English to English translation of Igbo (http://translation.babylon.com/english/to-english/Igbo/)
http://translation.babylon.com/english/Igbo/
Forum: Research Section 02-24-2014, 06:17 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 5,164
Posted By Rocko
20Igbo&pc=conduit&ptag=AB88647E1C5094D8F93F&form=C...

20Igbo&pc=conduit&ptag=AB88647E1C5094D8F93F&form=CONMHP&conlogo=CT3210127
Forum: Fiction 02-24-2014, 05:05 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 611
Posted By Rocko
Sorry. Had to delete due to my religious beliefs...

Sorry. Had to delete due to my religious beliefs about the hell doctrine.
Forum: The Library 02-24-2014, 06:06 AM
Replies: 3,739
Views: 298,354
Posted By Rocko
I'm reading "Space" by James A....

I'm reading "Space" by James A. Michener.
Forum: Tips & Advice 02-24-2014, 05:50 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,717
Posted By Rocko
Much of Isaac Asimov's fiction involves...

Much of Isaac Asimov's fiction involves conversation between characters preceded by a brief narrative intro.
Forum: Research Section 02-23-2014, 10:48 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 17,448
Posted By Rocko
I have three stories that are spin-offs of...

I have three stories that are spin-offs of writing exercises.
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-23-2014, 10:15 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,886
Posted By Rocko
Not true at all.

Not true at all.
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