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Forum: Introductions 05-19-2012, 04:41 AM
Replies: 7
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Posted By R.J.schus
Will do

Mission Accepted!

Almost forgot! I enjoy SciFi - Fantasy greatly and also have found a love for Classic literature. Contemporary work from the Beat Era and Hunter S. Thompson appeals to my more...
Forum: Fiction 05-19-2012, 04:38 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 863
Posted By R.J.schus
Great piece, I love your ability to realistically...

Great piece, I love your ability to realistically bounce between characters inner thought and whats going on around them. The part in which he becomes distracted with the Spider and the Raindrops...
Forum: Introductions 05-19-2012, 04:02 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 483
Posted By R.J.schus
Hello :) I will be sure to offer my...

Hello :)

I will be sure to offer my criticism Ive been keeping an eye out for fresh threads in fiction. I am already impressed with all the pieces I have read. I am across the board as far as...
Forum: Introductions 05-19-2012, 03:28 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 483
Posted By R.J.schus
Hi Everyone

English Major at SUNY Fredonia

I am open to any and all criticism on any works that I post. I will try my best to return the same constructive feedback. I am a young writer so honest opinions...
Forum: Fiction 05-19-2012, 03:10 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,041
Posted By R.J.schus
Great Stuff

I enjoy your style of writing immensely! I would love to see this excerpt turned into a short story, the style reminds me very much that of George Orwell's. Very grim very frustrating ( in a good way...
Forum: Previous Contests 05-17-2012, 07:25 PM
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Posted By R.J.schus
The reception filled the church pews with a...

The reception filled the church pews with a rambunctious energy that stirred the very air of the chapel. Affront the mass of people, the Pastor stood proudly as he radiated in pronubial stature from...
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