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Forum: Poetry 02-08-2015, 06:38 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 399
Posted By angelgirl
Poems and Polls

If you like polls and personality tests, this one involves poetry:

This is the Poll (what poetry book would you read?)...
Forum: Poetry 01-22-2015, 09:51 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 694
Posted By angelgirl
Yes, and it would also be 'shelf' not...

Yes, and it would also be 'shelf' not 'shelve'('shelves' is the plural).
Forum: Poetry 01-22-2015, 08:58 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,028
Posted By angelgirl
This poem sounds a little like a teacher who's...

This poem sounds a little like a teacher who's urging his classroom to be silent so he can teach them the lesson. I know it values the importance of the silence but the kids just don't have the time...
Forum: Poetry 01-22-2015, 08:47 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 694
Posted By angelgirl
I enjoyed the way you put yourself in the shoes...

I enjoyed the way you put yourself in the shoes of the spider (I find spiders quite freaky, btw). 'The roads all wrong,' its unappealing legs. Enjoyed.
Forum: Fiction 01-22-2015, 05:46 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 5,069
Posted By angelgirl
This piece is quite conversational. There's a...

This piece is quite conversational. There's a swift dialogue taking place between a girl and her mother. The girl is quite defensive but by the end of the conversation the mother breaks her down...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-22-2015, 03:33 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 700
Posted By angelgirl
What Poetry Book Are You? (Quiz)

Hi Forums!

Here's something for a little fun.

Do any of you enjoy personality quizzes? I personally love them! I've got one here about poetry which you could all do for a bit of fun. I know...
Forum: Publishing 07-21-2014, 07:45 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,925
Posted By angelgirl
Promotion

Hi Belinda,
When it comes to the promotion of your book, createspace doesn't really provide much of a choice for marketing, so I'd recommend a traditional publishers. It's probably more helpful in...
Forum: Publishing 07-04-2014, 09:40 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,925
Posted By angelgirl
Publishing

Hi Rudy, if you're looking to self-publish, here are a couple of websites I would recommend. You can actually upload your book for free in a do-it-all-yourself approach. Once you do that, your book...
Forum: Publishing 06-28-2014, 09:36 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,412
Posted By angelgirl
Here is another website to have in mind, as well...

Here is another website to have in mind, as well as your own google-searches:
http://www.winchad.com/blog/top-100-websites-for-book-promotion-and-author-promotion
Forum: Publishing 06-28-2014, 08:59 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,412
Posted By angelgirl
Hi Medini Summers, Talking to another...

Hi Medini Summers,

Talking to another self-published author is certainly what I need. I'm no expert on sales myself, so I can't give you much advise on this issue. I suppose I could give you a...
Forum: Publishing 06-12-2014, 10:22 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 3,580
Posted By angelgirl
I guess you would have to have really effective...

I guess you would have to have really effective marketing strategies to receive those sorts of volumes :)
Forum: Publishing 06-12-2014, 09:55 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,412
Posted By angelgirl
http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=51938

http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=51938
Forum: Publishing 06-12-2014, 09:47 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,412
Posted By angelgirl
I've self-published a book

Hi,

I shared with you all a story previously called 'the Government Boycott' in the fiction section. This story got a high number of views and lots of positive comments. If anyone wants to read...
Forum: Fiction 04-22-2014, 06:40 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 756
Posted By angelgirl
Hi there, wonderful story. You've written us a...

Hi there, wonderful story. You've written us a new fairy tale. It's somewhat like Cinderella (whoever the shoe fits) or Rumpelstiltskin (whoever can weave the straw into gold). It definitely has a...
Forum: Fiction 04-22-2014, 03:36 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 598
Posted By angelgirl
Thanks, I just needed some clarification how this...

Thanks, I just needed some clarification how this came on her. It's a great idea, by the way. Yours might be a rough draft, but you still need to brush up on your punctuation throughout it. Omg,...
Forum: Fiction 04-21-2014, 03:01 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 636
Posted By angelgirl
Yes, I would have assumed you were into Star...

Yes, I would have assumed you were into Star Wars, or something science fiction, because of the genre you're handling. Anyone who could create a fictional world like this must have been inspired by...
Forum: Fiction 04-21-2014, 02:51 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 752
Posted By angelgirl
It wasn't too bad, Oughie, keep at it. I only...

It wasn't too bad, Oughie, keep at it. I only assumed he would be resurrecting because he's the protagonist, and heros usually do. I thought it was strange that he thought it was odd that they...
Forum: Fiction 04-21-2014, 02:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 598
Posted By angelgirl
Hi, you've got punctuation errors throughout this...

Hi, you've got punctuation errors throughout this where there should be more commas and question marks. I've also read 'Tooth' and you've got a lot more grammatical errors there.

As for the...
Forum: Fiction 04-20-2014, 11:08 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 752
Posted By angelgirl
Hi Oughie, I thought the piece was a little James...

Hi Oughie, I thought the piece was a little James Bond-y. The hero stepping out of the scene to retrieve the action right after he's kissed the girl. I'm guessing the next thing he'll be doing is...
Forum: Fiction 04-20-2014, 10:07 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 636
Posted By angelgirl
I'm loving the passion and commitment you're...

I'm loving the passion and commitment you're putting into it. You're literally creating your own world, and there's so much imagination there. I was going to compare it a little to Star Wars, or...
Forum: Fiction 04-20-2014, 09:20 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 636
Posted By angelgirl
Hi writing fan, I've wanted to reply to the...

Hi writing fan, I've wanted to reply to the themes regarding the novel you're working on. I could tell it's packed with so much action and excitment, and there's a battle going on. Anyone who's...
Forum: Poetry 04-20-2014, 08:11 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 456
Posted By angelgirl
Oh, what a sad, solitary poem. Is this really...

Oh, what a sad, solitary poem. Is this really the way you feel, or are you making it up. The theme of isolation is evident in the poetry. There may be one or two punctuation issues, where the...
Forum: Fiction 04-20-2014, 07:34 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 926
Posted By angelgirl
OK, Cloverish, not too bad to read. I've enjoyed...

OK, Cloverish, not too bad to read. I've enjoyed the witty tone in your narration. Two grammatical errors:
1.
* you mean 'thump.'


2. The magician says:

This translates as 'you have...
Forum: Fiction 04-19-2014, 09:49 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 507
Posted By angelgirl
Hi, I'm surprised you haven't gotten any replies...

Hi, I'm surprised you haven't gotten any replies for this, considering it's the shortest thing here. I though your choice of protagonist's name was unusual. I'm not aware of many people called...
Forum: Fiction 04-19-2014, 06:03 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 501
Posted By angelgirl
Hi there, I liked your story, it was well...

Hi there, I liked your story, it was well written, but I'll just go through one or two issues I had with your spelling, and plot line. Let's start with spelling first:

1.

*It should be 'with a...
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