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Forum: Fiction 09-09-2017, 10:46 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 415
Posted By SecretDurham
Yeah, its rough, and as you put it... Not sure of...

Yeah, its rough, and as you put it... Not sure of its genre. I kinda just ran with it as it entered my head.

All positive crit as far as I'm concerned. That's why we join these sites.

All...
Forum: Introductions 09-08-2017, 11:53 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 487
Posted By SecretDurham
Erm... Yeah, I guess you have a good point there,...

Erm... Yeah, I guess you have a good point there, Flea. Method in madness, or a strange sanity... Only the Goblin knows! Haha! Cool!
Forum: Introductions 09-08-2017, 10:49 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 641
Posted By SecretDurham
Welcome! Take a seat, have a cuppa, grab a...

Welcome! Take a seat, have a cuppa, grab a cookie, and enjoy the show!
Forum: Introductions 09-08-2017, 10:45 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 569
Posted By SecretDurham
Hello, good evening, and welcome! Tonight's...

Hello, good evening, and welcome!

Tonight's showing will border on the incredible, the irrational, and the innermost desires and thoughts of a Cat... I hope you will enjoy the film.


But...
Forum: Tips & Advice 09-08-2017, 09:07 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,294
Posted By SecretDurham
Dialogue. Sometimes can't get it to flow...

Dialogue.

Sometimes can't get it to flow right, and it seems strained.

Characters.

Getting the right feel for them, who they are and what they are likely to say.

World building.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-08-2017, 08:57 AM
Replies: 72
Views: 6,325
Posted By SecretDurham
Spirit did a cover of Watchtower, its an odd one,...

Spirit did a cover of Watchtower, its an odd one, but nice at the same time. It's out there on youtube I think.
Forum: Introductions 09-08-2017, 08:53 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 447
Posted By SecretDurham
Mae Giovanon, Melohir! Hello, and well met...

Mae Giovanon, Melohir!

Hello, and well met my friend!

Hope you, like me, find a warm place to do your writing justice.

SecretDurham.
Forum: Introductions 09-08-2017, 08:49 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 487
Posted By SecretDurham
Well, having read some of your previous posts...

Well, having read some of your previous posts elsewhere, Flea. I believe the Goblin within your mind, might actually be who you are... Don't mind conversing with Goblins, but those Orc's are right...
Forum: Introductions 09-08-2017, 08:45 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 487
Posted By SecretDurham
By the way - your handle keeps making me hum The...

By the way - your handle keeps making me hum The Pink Panther tune...

durham durham...durham..durham durham durham durham dur hammmm...diddle eh dada.


If I had a Pound sterling for each...
Forum: Poetry 09-08-2017, 04:41 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 706
Posted By SecretDurham
I very much enjoyed this, Grace. Though I...

I very much enjoyed this, Grace.

Though I don't understand the differing Prose and Stanza's, I do write a little poetry at times. Not as deeply thoughtful as this, nor written as well. More...
Forum: Introductions 09-08-2017, 04:26 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 487
Posted By SecretDurham
Thanks, Grace. Nice to be here, even if it...

Thanks, Grace.

Nice to be here, even if it is an oddity of sorts to navigate.

I have posted a short story in the Fiction thread The Four Bikers of the Apocalypse. I wrote it after a chat with...
Forum: Fiction 09-07-2017, 09:50 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,065
Posted By SecretDurham
I like the slow decisive unstoppable movement of...

I like the slow decisive unstoppable movement of the fog which you place here, with your edit. The first seemed forced and bitty. This is nice, and I too would like to read more.
Forum: Fiction 09-07-2017, 07:35 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 415
Posted By SecretDurham
The Four Bikers of the Apocalypse (Short story)

The Four Bikers of the Apocalypse


As a reporter it would seem that everyone has a story to tell. From those in the public eye, to the passer by, we all have a tale or two to tell. And I more so...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 09-07-2017, 07:20 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,404
Posted By SecretDurham
Being a huge fan of Tolkien, my choice would be...

Being a huge fan of Tolkien, my choice would be the second mixed with elements of the third.

However, I also started to write a Fantasy Novel which had the usual tropes of Men, Elves and Dwarves....
Forum: Fiction 09-07-2017, 07:06 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 18,406
Posted By SecretDurham
Great potential, but all my concerns were voiced...

Great potential, but all my concerns were voiced by other previous posters.

The start would hugely benefit from it being narrated, by who? That does not matter so much, who ever is narrating will...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-07-2017, 06:52 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,236
Posted By SecretDurham
I find that I write about anything that seems to...

I find that I write about anything that seems to just pop into my head that day...

Like a set of numbers upon my Bin, they seemed like something strange. The way the sequence was, and the digits...
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-07-2017, 06:19 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 5,130
Posted By SecretDurham
Yeah... Dragons do exist...

Yeah... Dragons do exist...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-07-2017, 05:43 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 4,251
Posted By SecretDurham
Amongst

Amongst
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-07-2017, 05:40 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 901
Posted By SecretDurham
Foundations of the Kings Highway... Just a...

Foundations of the Kings Highway...

Just a thought for you!
Forum: Non-Fiction 09-07-2017, 05:30 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 5,130
Posted By SecretDurham
I don't mind others views on my writing, even...

I don't mind others views on my writing, even when they say shit like "Would this not be a better...", or even the "You should have...". I smile, I wave and go back to writing. I don't care if my...
Forum: Introductions 09-07-2017, 05:20 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 487
Posted By SecretDurham
Resurrected Writer

Mae Giovanon...

While I joined this writers forum some time ago, I felt it was premature to do so.

After some time, I thought to return here. And so I have.

I look for ward to reading some...
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