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Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-06-2013, 02:42 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,117
Posted By Lalaley
Well, my overall goal is to complete the first...

Well, my overall goal is to complete the first draft of my novel by the end of the year.

I was actually thinking earlier that I should set myself a daily goal, but then I decided that that...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-06-2013, 02:28 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 3,036
Posted By Lalaley
Description of Surroundings

So, I have huge troubles with describing the places my characters visit and live. I end up just listing off what they are seeing, which I know is not ideal... So, my question is, does anyone know of...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 03-06-2013, 03:35 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,377
Posted By Lalaley
Love is always good motivation. Wether its...

Love is always good motivation. Wether its romantic love, family love, friendship love, the love of a pet, or a place...

Sorry, probably not much help but it is the best I can come up with!
Forum: Fiction 03-05-2013, 12:19 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 577
Posted By Lalaley
I thought it was well written, and it held my...

I thought it was well written, and it held my interest. However, I felt the last sentence kind of let it down? I don't know if that makes sense... I just think you could have written something more,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-04-2013, 09:16 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 3,470
Posted By Lalaley
I'd say that was the reason I was online too, but...

I'd say that was the reason I was online too, but I cleverly rushed through my chores so I could have the 'luxury' of foruming/writing whilst my little boy slept. ;)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-04-2013, 06:16 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 3,470
Posted By Lalaley
That is an awfully open question... 'Here' can...

That is an awfully open question... 'Here' can mean anywhere... Do you mean this forum? Or wherever 'here' is for you? I am at my 'here' because I am unable to leave the house while my precious boy...
Forum: The Library 03-02-2013, 07:32 AM
Replies: 287
Views: 42,340
Posted By Lalaley
I think the saddest book I've ever read is...

I think the saddest book I've ever read is probably... Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. I have never, ever, cried so much whilst reading something. The chapter, towards the end, The Forest Again...
Forum: The Library 03-02-2013, 07:28 AM
Replies: 90
Views: 19,717
Posted By Lalaley
It was probably Matilda, by Roald Dahl. Though, I...

It was probably Matilda, by Roald Dahl. Though, I am sure I read (and was read to) many others before hand. I used to read that over, and over and over! Also, Charlotte's Web.

But, I did stop...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-02-2013, 06:38 AM
Replies: 53
Views: 2,565
Posted By Lalaley
The way I see it, it's more similar to music...

The way I see it, it's more similar to music recording than painting/art work.

When you go into a studio (mostly) you have a producer. They are there, not to write or perform your music for you,...
Forum: Fiction 02-27-2013, 12:58 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 491
Posted By Lalaley
Hi, I found this quite interesting, however I...

Hi, I found this quite interesting, however I noticed that you have mixed up your tenses quite a lot. It starts off in past tense, then moves to present, then back again... etc. So you might want to...
Forum: Fiction 02-26-2013, 02:36 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 935
Posted By Lalaley
I thought it was a good follow up to your...

I thought it was a good follow up to your previous story, I found it intriguing. However, it may just be me, but you might want to revise the way your news reporters are speaking. Do you watch the...
Forum: Lyrics 02-22-2013, 02:11 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 416
Posted By Lalaley
I Used to Write Songs...

EDIT = I've deleted it... Sorry if this is breaking some kind of rule, but I wish I had never posted it in the first place...
Forum: The Library 02-22-2013, 01:50 PM
Replies: 134
Views: 25,395
Posted By Lalaley
My all time favourite is J K Rowling... The Harry...

My all time favourite is J K Rowling... The Harry Potter books literally changed my life... Ha!

But I also love Philip Pullman, Patrick Rothfuss (I can't even tell you how much I need to read the...
Forum: Fiction 02-19-2013, 06:49 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 624
Posted By Lalaley
I don't understand why you hate it. I thought it...

I don't understand why you hate it. I thought it was really well written and interesting. I got slightly confused when Artie brought the baby out, but that is probably just my cogs not ticking...
Forum: Introductions 02-19-2013, 06:33 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 600
Posted By Lalaley
I'm a bit lost with punctuation at times... It's...

I'm a bit lost with punctuation at times... It's just practice, and lot of thinking! Have you posted any of your work yet? I will have a look for you when you do. Once you get going, you'll be able...
Forum: Introductions 02-17-2013, 12:11 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 600
Posted By Lalaley
Hi! I've only just signed up this week too, and...

Hi! I've only just signed up this week too, and am also dyslexic. It really is possible to train your brain to get around it. I am happy to help in anyway I can, I know it can be hard.
Good luck! ...
Forum: Fiction 02-17-2013, 05:12 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 902
Posted By Lalaley
I didn't mind at all. Hope it wasn't too...

I didn't mind at all. Hope it wasn't too 'nit-picky'!

I guess I'm already on an adventure of nappy changing and washing up! Ha! But, seriously, parenthood is a bit like an adventure. You never...
Forum: The Library 02-17-2013, 05:05 AM
Replies: 3,703
Views: 262,346
Posted By Lalaley
Ooh, I'll have to check that out. I loved the...

Ooh, I'll have to check that out. I loved the 'study' books. Wasnt that keen on the following Triolgoy she did though. Did you read the 'Glass' series?
Forum: Fiction 02-16-2013, 06:10 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 902
Posted By Lalaley
No problem amya, I am just having another look...

No problem amya, I am just having another look through now, while the boy is distracted with drawing... I feel a bit of a fraud at critiquing and I am very new to it, so please bear with me and I...
Forum: Introductions 02-16-2013, 05:52 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 735
Posted By Lalaley
See, I would never allow him anywhere near a...

See, I would never allow him anywhere near a shampoo bottle! That is very brave of you! Either that, or I am a meanie... Maybe a mixture of both. :p I'm sure he would thoroughly enjoy having a good...
Forum: The Library 02-16-2013, 04:42 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,760
Posted By Lalaley
Waaaaaay too many. I've stopped myself from...

Waaaaaay too many. I've stopped myself from buying new books as I have so many waiting... I just never seem to have the time to read these days... Chores, chores and chores! Once I've finished the...
Forum: The Library 02-16-2013, 04:39 AM
Replies: 3,703
Views: 262,346
Posted By Lalaley
I'm trying to read Eldest by Christopher Paolini....

I'm trying to read Eldest by Christopher Paolini. I read Eargon a few months back, and was eager to start Eldest. I haven't actually picked it up for weeks, and weeks. I hate not finishing books so I...
Forum: Fiction 02-15-2013, 06:55 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 705
Posted By Lalaley
Your explanation helped me too. I actually didn't...

Your explanation helped me too. I actually didn't really notice there had been a car crash at first, but I've just re-read it a couple of times and I see it now! Its nice to see that my assumption...
Forum: Fiction 02-15-2013, 05:14 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 902
Posted By Lalaley
I really liked it, and was surprised by the...

I really liked it, and was surprised by the pregnancy! I think the ending is fine, but if it were me, I would probably say something about being a mother, and having a child is a far greater...
Forum: Fiction 02-15-2013, 04:49 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 705
Posted By Lalaley
I thought it very well written, and intriguing....

I thought it very well written, and intriguing. However, if I am completely honest, I'm not entirely sure if I understood it... I mean, I have a vague idea, but I could be completely wrong!
But, it...
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