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Forum: Poetry 09-30-2018, 09:58 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
We don't sleep either, just kind of wake up...

We don't sleep either, just kind of wake up thirsty
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 05:48 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
Fake news!!!! Reading is horroble for the soul

Fake news!!!! Reading is horroble for the soul
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 05:06 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
Now let's play the game... Hellen Keller or...

Now let's play the game...

Hellen Keller or Zombie


"Aagghagshahahahha"
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 05:05 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
Bah! Reading is for nerds.

Bah! Reading is for nerds.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 04:34 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
Deleted due to vulgarity. Apologies people. Be...

Deleted due to vulgarity. Apologies people. Be kind rewind!
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 04:19 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
A beauty that will last forever, Graecian, that...

A beauty that will last forever, Graecian, that the composer can pour his love into, urn

Edit

And the etchings on the side of his love that will last forever
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 04:17 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
I dont mean it that way, but honestly, men have...

I dont mean it that way, but honestly, men have had our voices heard for thousands of years. Yeah I was raised on being a man and what that entails and to me, that means I will do everything to give...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 04:10 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
Falsely accused is one thing yes, but when a...

Falsely accused is one thing yes, but when a gender has been brought up to accept subjugationand then finally feel comfortable enough to speak out, ajd every one wants to jump to falsely accused,...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 04:08 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
True, but that comes down to the whole All Lives...

True, but that comes down to the whole All Lives Matter issue that ignores that a majority of one populace is targeted. It desensitized people to the fact that 10 times as many women, and in...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 03:59 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
Problem isn't that a 17 year old did not "know"...

Problem isn't that a 17 year old did not "know" right from wrong, but that society has driven in the stake that it is okay to pester women even if they say no.

Morality is instinctual, the golden...
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 03:57 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
Gotta go with the classic Graecian Urn. But Byron...

Gotta go with the classic Graecian Urn. But Byron did do majesty with the dedication in Don Juan which is one of my favorotes next to Mac Flecknoe by Dryden
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 03:50 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
If they had to go back 36 years hes a saint? ...

If they had to go back 36 years hes a saint?

Nah man, the fear and shame instilled in women and the capability of money to hide such things is a joke.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 03:49 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
Thank God I only rubbed my dick on her! Thank...

Thank God I only rubbed my dick on her! Thank white Jesus I didn't insert myself. A mushroom stamp is just a prank...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 03:47 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
Good. I hope they are fucking terrified. Hope...

Good. I hope they are fucking terrified. Hope they live in constant fear of each news article and every notification on their phone. I hope the telltale beat plagues their existence until they...
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 03:38 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
Byron did wonders but wrote poetry and was one of...

Byron did wonders but wrote poetry and was one of the first hippies. Though, he was a harass championing justice, and created an entire movement, he still wrote poetry.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-29-2018, 03:34 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 1,072
Posted By daes13
Yay! If I raped someone when I was younger and...

Yay! If I raped someone when I was younger and learned my lesson then all punishment has been dealt. Whew. Bet that's a load off a bunch of chauvanistic assholes that believe in the friend zone and...
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 03:31 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
Exactly! Dr. Seuss was not a poet cause he tried...

Exactly! Dr. Seuss was not a poet cause he tried to write all poetic and shit. Thats my point. And yeah, Keats the shit.

Never knew i went anywhere hahaha
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 02:52 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
I honestly don't know a simpler way to say it...

I honestly don't know a simpler way to say it hahahaha.

I love Keats, and most of his poetry, rhymed and all that shit, reads like common speech. It's beautiful. He was the Cobain of the Romantic...
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2018, 12:59 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 513
Posted By daes13
The one thing you should never do when writing a...

The one thing you should never do when writing a poem, is try to write a poem.
Forum: Fiction 09-29-2018, 03:32 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 271
Posted By daes13
I will refrain from commenting on your works...

I will refrain from commenting on your works then. Good luck, and be careful of them cups hahaha
Forum: Fiction 09-28-2018, 12:38 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 271
Posted By daes13
Seems like an expository prologue. I can't get in...

Seems like an expository prologue. I can't get in the story.
Forum: Fiction 09-27-2018, 02:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 482
Posted By daes13
Been on a kick of editing lately so imma give you...

Been on a kick of editing lately so imma give you some advice for your lines...

Prepositions are the enemy. There is always a better way to describe something.

Avoid -ing verbs to maintain...
Forum: Fiction 09-08-2018, 12:53 AM
Replies: 93
Views: 2,524
Posted By daes13
I mean give us more damnit! Its been weeks now...

I mean give us more damnit! Its been weeks now haha. And don't cut anything completely unless you decide it doesnt go with the story. As it stands 2 goes with the story better than 1 to me, because...
Forum: Fiction 09-07-2018, 04:53 PM
Replies: 93
Views: 2,524
Posted By daes13
I once gave one of my professors the first two...

I once gave one of my professors the first two pages of a current work,cause that's all he asked for. Prestigiously published man from New York with an extensive Wikipedia page and a multitude of...
Forum: Fiction 09-06-2018, 03:14 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 333
Posted By daes13
Just caught up and saw the part where you are...

Just caught up and saw the part where you are doing a pulp mocku of sorts. Unfortunately, your writing is too good for that, or the fact that there is an utter lack of humor in these pieces.

Its...
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