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Forum: Fiction 07-31-2009, 11:11 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,011
Posted By MichalPietrasz
Yeah this was actually a writing exercise I did...

Yeah this was actually a writing exercise I did and I just wanted to know if it had any merits to be able to stand alone or become a longer piece. Thanks for the comments.
Forum: Fiction 07-31-2009, 10:03 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,011
Posted By MichalPietrasz
Trial of Robin Hood

I just want to describe what this piece is before anyone reads it so no one is confused. This piece is a reimagining of Robin Hood in modern times. I wrote it as a transcript from the opening defense...
Forum: Poetry 07-29-2009, 12:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 485
Posted By MichalPietrasz
I'd love to get more comments about this piece....

I'd love to get more comments about this piece. Thanks everyone!
Forum: Fiction 07-24-2009, 09:29 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 413
Posted By MichalPietrasz
Heavenly Son

Just wanted to post a short story and hear some people's thoughts. Enjoy!


Heavenly Son
by Michal Pietrasz


God is dead.

The cross around my neck is gold. Not at all like that...
Forum: Poetry 07-24-2009, 09:26 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 872
Posted By MichalPietrasz
Oh my god! This poem makes me never want to visit...

Oh my god! This poem makes me never want to visit where you live! I love all the imagery and all the details! They are fantastic and paint a perfect picture of this place. I do have a question as to...
Forum: Poetry 07-24-2009, 09:20 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 536
Posted By MichalPietrasz
I will say that I was confused as to the...

I will say that I was confused as to the direction of this poem. It seemed like there were great lines here and great language, just disheveled a bit. I don't want to say make this poem a narrative...
Forum: Poetry 07-24-2009, 09:13 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,095
Posted By MichalPietrasz
Journey Holding your breath over <~~people...

Journey

Holding your breath over <~~people have said it before but the your is bothersome especially as the first line in the poem.
the Runcorn bridge
is easier on trains,
speeding past grey...
Forum: Poetry 07-24-2009, 12:00 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 485
Posted By MichalPietrasz
A Man's Death

Here's my poem. Tell me what you think! Thanks


A Manís Death
By Michal Pietrasz

Mary, gorgeous legs! walks by with no name tag, coffee running through her veins,
stops at some...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2009, 09:56 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,418
Posted By MichalPietrasz
Words on Paper

I want to post a poem that I've been working on. Not my best work but I want it to be held to that standard, so please tell me what is wrong with it and how I can make it better. Thanks everyone!
...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2009, 09:49 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 611
Posted By MichalPietrasz
I want to tell you that I loved this poem. I...

I want to tell you that I loved this poem. I loved what you were trying to do and you completely accomplished. I will admit that I don't know mythology well, so I don't know all the people you used...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2009, 09:44 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,321
Posted By MichalPietrasz
OH MY GOD! Can I tell you that I have goosebumps...

OH MY GOD! Can I tell you that I have goosebumps after reading your poem? It was so lyrical and beautiful. The most powerful stanza is the one before the last one. It just seems to come from a place...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2009, 09:35 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,378
Posted By MichalPietrasz
I really loved the words that you say here. I'm...

I really loved the words that you say here. I'm going to give the critique first. I don't know what Polonius has to do with the poem at all. I'd love for it to work together, it doesn't seem to. I...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2009, 09:27 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 11,141
Posted By MichalPietrasz
I just want to say that there are some very good...

I just want to say that there are some very good ideas in this poem. They just need to be fleshed out more. I really like the feeling and the emotions of this poem but it seems to me like it's a...
Forum: Introductions 07-13-2009, 09:17 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 487
Posted By MichalPietrasz
Let Me Introduce Myself

Hey everyone,
I'm new on this site and just wanted to say hello. I'm a writer, a poet, an actor, a comedian, an artist...pretty much I'm any profession that creates art. What do I do for money? ...
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