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Neurotic Nightmares





Nightmares

So vice
Cheshire Cat's grin
Demented as Grim
A Mad Tea-Party
With a distorted pair
Off with her head
Let her die in bed
Blood-strained and blood red

Little Alice, little Alice
Sleeping as you may
Little Alice, little Alice,
Want to come to play?

Little Alice, little Alice
Big bright blue eyes
Little Alice, little Alice
Following the cries

Little Alice, little Alice
You are going to pay

FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
PURGATORY

Little Alice, little Alice
Listen to the sounds
Little Alice, little Alice
Death defying frowns

Little Alice, little Alice
Please try to wake up
Little Alice, little Alice
Floating in Death’s cup

Little Alice, little Alice
You are going to pay

FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
PURGATORY

Little Alice, little Alice
Cries a sea of tears
Little Alice, little Alice
Seeing all her fears

Little Alice, Little Alice
Why have you cried?
Little Alice, Little Alice
Why have you died?

FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
PURGATORY

Nightmares
Of a child
Cheshire Cat's grin
Wild
A Mad Tea-Party
With a distorted pair
Off with her head
Let her die in bed
Blood-strained
Blood red


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Old 08-01-2006, 12:20 PM
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im surprised this got overlooked. this so daamn awesome
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Old 08-01-2006, 12:34 PM
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Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
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Old 08-01-2006, 02:26 PM
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This is one of my favorites from you
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Old 08-01-2006, 02:29 PM
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Thank you so much
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Old 08-01-2006, 02:43 PM
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dude, this song makes me wanna go take a poop. just kidding, very awesome
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Old 08-01-2006, 03:04 PM
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lol. Only one thing that was jarring... Great song! Slightly disturbing, but great!
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Oopsie-daisy. Thank you CT - Means a lot.
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awsome dude thats great betterer then any song i could write

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Old 08-02-2006, 11:17 AM
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I appreciate the thoughts
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Old 09-29-2006, 12:20 PM
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A lot of changes and fixes, but I held true to the main story of my song Hope you guys like it
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Old 09-29-2006, 12:48 PM
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Little Alice, little Alice
Sleeping as you may
Little Alice, little Alice,
Want to come to play[?]

FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENTED
DANTES
[Why Dante? If keeping this, perhaps make it plural...]
PURGATORY

FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENRED
{Typo, yeah, but Demon Red is interesting too. }
DANTE
PURGATORY

FOLLOW
FIND
NIGHTMARES
SO DIVINE
NEUROTIC
DEMENRED
DANTE
PURGATORY


Whee! FUN song!
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Thanks a lot I appreciate it a ton
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The funnest song I've ever screamed...

Jolly good, Devon
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Thank you buddy
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